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• Thoughts of Pudding

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-10-05

  Glad Hermione can just laugh that sort of thing off. When it happened to me I was pretty well traumatized. Well maybe only a bit traumatized.
  
  This was quite possibly my favorite chapter so far. Harry's characterization was excellent, and everything with Hermione is finally out in the open...
  
  Looking forward to more.

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  (#) Minion 2008-10-05

  Great chapters. Harry should make the Weasley twins his proxies in the Wizengamot.

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  (#) lycus 2008-10-05

  That was an excellent chapter, And I love how you don't rush the story. That means more chapters to read. But i'm glad that they got that out there and hope that they can build on that, Ans it wouldn't surprise me if it was Luna who say why not share him. But thanks again for opening everyones eyes to how Dumbles really is.

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  (#) LordSeagen 2008-10-05

  Hey great chapter. I think Harry is going to have at least two wives. You've already hinted at it didn't you with the twins joke. So which one will be Lady Black and which will be Lady Potter. Update soon.

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  (#) jimnjoye 2008-10-05

  I like your story so far. Keep up the good work. Loved the scene with Draco & Cissy. Hope we see more of her.

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  (#) rdgale2000 2008-10-05

  Great story! Good save on Susan. I wonder if Luna is going to explain how things are in the Wizarding world - since they seem to be stuck in the Medieval times.
  
  Well written, well paced.
  
  Can't wait until Dumbledor gets his just deserts.
  
  I look forward to your next chapter.
  
  rdgale

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  (#) BJH 2008-10-06

  This was a really really good chapter. The plot development might have been as expected, Harry realizing he has feelings for both Hermione and Luna, Albus being even more cruel and manipulative than anyone expected, Draco being a fool, and Narcissa starting to rethink her positions, but it was well executed.
  
  But what really got me were the three or four amazing plays on words you gave us. "the Potter calling the kettle Black" was hilarious! then getting rid of the prtrait by giving it to Kreacher and having him move it to his little lair? Why didn't I think of that! Then pointing out that Voldemort used the bones of his MUGGLE father and the blood of a half-blood to resurrect himself! I never thought of it that way before. I wonder if his not having any blood connection to Slytherin's line will have any impact on the rest of the plot? Will Hogwarts reject him as an heir to one of the founders? Will Gringotts deny him access to some secret vault because he is no longer a blood relative? It might be vital later.
  
  Thanks for the update.
  
  BJH

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  (#) SpringRaine 2008-10-09

  I'd like to see Luna be Lady Black and Hermione be Lady Potter. I think their personalities fit right into those particular families.
  
  I think Neville needs a girlfriend. I think he and Susan would be a good match.
  
  I love both Remus and Tonks, but I hate them together as a couple. I'd like to see Remus with Narcissa and Tonks with Charlie.

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  (#) Keldin 2009-05-17

  I always love to pull that 'accidentally overhearing someone's parents lovemaking' bit too. It never gets old.
  
  And the twins were brilliant.

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