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• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-09

  Hi there Dondon,
  
  It was nice to see a touching moment between Charli and Jade.
  
  As far as a domination between Rick and Jade I think I see Jade as the dominant one but barely. I see them both into each other.
  
  Just my opinion.
  

  Author's response

  Hey, I thought I should have at least one nice moment between them, and explain why Jade is the way she is.
  
  That's totally fine if you think that, your opinion as the reader is what matters to this story.
  
  Thanks for taking the time to review and give me some ideas :)
  
  dondon xo.

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) WeasleyTwinGirl 2008-10-09

  I think I can see Jade sort of manipulating Rick into something, but having Rick wear the pants could be a nice twist. Anyway I LOVE this story!!!

  Author's response

  Yeah it could be a good twist, I will have to think about it and hopefully have a new chapter up tonight or in the morning.
  
  Thanks for saying you love the story, Im sure it loves you back lol.
  
  Thanks for the review :)
  
  dondon xo.

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) neve 2008-10-13

  I love the extra information about Jade, i actually felt sympathy for her. I don't think this is going to go well for Gerard somehow.

  Author's response

  Yeah, it is sort of hard on her, but not Gerard's fault either.
  
  You could be right :D
  
  Thanks for your review!!
  
  dondon xo.

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2008-11-04

  Oh my god..Jade is such a BITCH!
  from now on im referring to her as just that; a biiiiig betch!

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) Dress_Me_Up_In_Drag 2008-11-04

  Ha ha betch..my friend uses that word..for a while I thought we were the only ones to use it!
  
  Grr
  
  oh well
  
  LOVE this story, btw

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