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Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) neve 2008-10-15
LOL at Supernanny Gerard.
Poor Bob but yet i couldn't stop laughing. Loved the Frank bit too.
I love the light-hearted moments in your story, it's so funny.Author's response
Haha, thanks, I wanted to try and make it funny cause Im sure if the guys took a baby on tour in real life it would be something like that. Them not having a clue what to do :P
Thanks for your review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) gees_vampire69 2008-10-15
aww poor bob lol that would suck!
cant wait for moreAuthor's response
lol it would deffo suck!
thanks for your review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) WeasleyTwinGirl 2008-10-16
Lol I would totally puke if I was in Bob's position XD
I love it! More soon please!
I'd rate but all my points are gone D:Author's response
Haha, I know baby sick yak *shudders*
hey its no bother, reviews are just as good
thanks!!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) KirstinRevenge 2008-10-17
Uh, so, um yeah, I love this story.
You whould keep writing... and update now.
I've never read another sotry like this one.
UPDATE soon, please.
XO
Kirstin RevengeAuthor's response
Wow thanks, thats so nice of you. I will update tonight I promise!
Keep reading and thanks so much for your review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-17
Hi there Dondon,
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Poor Charli just wanting to go to Gamar's
I loved Frank and the mention of thepooper scooper because having all those dogs it would be what he was used to. LOL!!!
Poor Bob, but that's just kids.
I love the bnads interaction with her and looking forward to reading the next chapter.Author's response
Hey, I know poor Charli, she see's Donna as a mother figure as Jade wasn't really there often.
Haha, Frank makes everything so funny XP
And Bob was just unlucky there lol
thanks for your review!
dondon xo.
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