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Opaque and White...
1 reviewLovely...he comes to haunt me all ways, maybe one day-one day he can stay.....( Frerard ).
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Harrow here hello everyone i got this idea over the weekend and was inspired to write it this story is sort of halloweenish if that is even a word. Anyway i need you guys help on here for this story because i'm helping my brother with his college english class and his grades depend on my writing. So review and rate seriousily if i make any mistakes and if you ever see something and need to bring it to my attention just tell me and i will listen. Enough of my ramblings enjoy and oh yeah this is sort of a wierd start but hey what can you do right?:.
" Uhh " he would moan going lower and slower with every gentle hand movement he did, his groin would be on fire and the whole of his body would sweat but he wouldn't care he had to do this and he had to do it now. The boy was known as bob bryar but to others he was simply known as bobby and he was the most famous and most liked 17 year old football player in his boarding school, there was no one as good as him and no one to fit the part more than he did. Aside from being muscular and thick bob wasn't fat he worked out regularly and watched what he ate, he exercised with every chance he got and never led a sedentary lifestyle.
Bob was always up and about and because his mom and dad was filthy rich him and his friends could afford to do that. Bob was the most masculine kind of guy one could ever meet he carried weights around everywhere with him and was inlove with pro boxing and football, but bob had had a problem he had been gay for 4 whole years and it was known by none. It started when bob moved from chicago to belleville new jersey because he had been found out there by the teachers at his catholic school, they then kicked him out and the kids on his block began to make fun of him.
Bob was strong but the harassment his family suffered through was the point of his breakage, so the family moved to new jersey and bob became quiet about it he had had enough with that so he kept feelings like those to himself. But near his neighborhood stood the poor part of belleville that was some ways away, and at a certain time everyday bob would see this boy...a boy that made these gay feelings come back.
The boy was very delicate looking yet looked like he could be emo and punkish too, he had the darkest of hair that was so black and thick with blood red dye at the top and down the back, he had the most prettiest delicate olive colored skin it had highlights of baby pink in it too, and his eyes was simply gorgeous being hazeled and gold colored yet sometimes gray and at the right time blue and green too. He would wear black clothes and looked like a vampyre from out of a hot and romantic love story.
Bob was in a boarding school which meant he only went home on the weekend, but throughout monday to friday bob would sit outside his school and watch for the boy and his brother to walk by. Bob didn't know the boy's name but he was lovely all the rest and bob had liked him for 3 years. It was a crush at first but then over time it grew to something more and bob fell for him. Uuknowingly bob beganned to follow the boy home, but he only did it once the boy had lived with his mom and dad and brother and through other people's conversations bob would listen to what people had said about him.
The boy went to the local belleville highschool and was a very shy kid, he often stayed in the house when there was no school and would be sometimes spotted around the neighborhood but only when the sun wasn't out. In his school the boy was even more unnoticed, sitting in the back of the class with his head down hiding his face behind the curtain of his black and straight hair, the only thing he participated in was the art club and the chess club with his even nerdy but somehow more popular brother.
He smoked people said and survived off a diet of coffee and pop tarts, he could sing too and was what one would call a hopeless romantic. Lovingly gentle was what bob wanted someone to be with him so he beganned to buy the dark haired boy things, he learned that the kid liked comics and super heroes and action figures, so he would buy them and then leave them on his porch entitled with sappy and love felt things and words. But regardless of what bob would do the boy never noticed him, he didn't do it on purpose but he just never had the time and so bob with his love grew to borderline obsession.
Bob beganned to hate the boy's brother and hate the boy himself, he wrote constant letters of anger but never sent them and one year he actually made himself sick with thinking about him, bob beganned to have sexual fantasies about the little skinny, black haired boy and to deal with them bob beganned to frequently masturbate. In his school bob would excuse himself whenever he felt his impending hard on and would go to the bathroom and fantasize of the boy while doing himself, but one day ray had finally become suspicious of him and followed him to the bathroom.
Bob had just been finishing, coming down from off his ejaculatory high when ray entered the bathroom and questioned him on did he have a blatter problem?. Bob had been trying to answer but the sweaty condition he had been in answered for him, but after much denial bob broke and told ray what no one else had heard yet..." I'm gay ". After breaking to him ray and bob became closer and they learned more about the boy, but still the boy was doing the same thing ignoring him and bob became upset.
Ray then told something to bob that he just didn't want to hear that maybe this boy wasn't gay after all, but this only made bob enraged and he became so desperate to prove otherwise that one day while the boy was walking home alone bob and ray confronted him.
What was suppose to be a simple confrontation became a arguement and ofcourse ray took up for bob, they claimed that the boy was indeed gay and that he had been ignoring bob on purpose the boy never even knew who he was but that didn't stop them, and soon they beganned to hit him. They would hit him in the face saying that they would stop if the boy admitted he was gay, but he wouldn't so the hits became stronger and more random. But the boy escaped them and ran into the nearby park trying so desperately to get away, but bob and ray knew everything around here and they found him with ease.
When they caught up to him bob beat the boy down and dragged him into the nearby bushes, where he told ray to hold him down while bob " Tested " him. Bob did this by feeling all over the boy's skinny and pale body and gropping him hard inside his tight pants, he even kissed him and rubbed upagainst him but the boy did not get aroused he only screamed louder. Bob just wanted him to shut up, he just wanted him to want this as much as he did but the boy screamed and tried so hard to get away.
The boy's pouty cheeks had become red and his lips had been bleeding, and in his frenzied efforts to get bob off of him his fingernails had broken. But bob stayed put yelling at him to say that he wanted this but it was clear he didn't. And then it happened, some how the boy had managed to get out from up under bob and take off to run, ray screamed telling bob to stop him but the boy was skinny and way to fast, so bob did something he suddenly remebered he had brought along something with him.
It was a pitch black handgun that he had had, it was loaded with 3 bullets left bob shot the boy 2 times, one bullet hitting him in the chest and the other hitting him in the arm. It was as if in slow motion when the pretty boy fell and hit the ground right outside across the street from his home, he layed completely still because he had died on impact. Ray stood shocked, he didn't expect bob to shoot him he only wanted bob to go after him and stop him from telling on them, but now the boy wouldn't tell he never would it would be bob and ray's dirty secret forever...
After much contemplation they decided to dispose of the body by taking it somewhere and cutting it up and distributing the body parts in unmarked graves all over a far away cemetery. They did just that cutting the boy's pretty arms and hands off, then his legs then his feet, they attempted to cut off the head too but only got to the bone in the neck because they were both to freaked out to continue.
And on a pact the 2 made never to rat eachother out, they would die and go to their graves with their mouth's sealed about this no one could know. But all over the city and around the school's his picture was showed and everyone knew the name of the often invisible vampyre boy, his name was....Gerard way.
That was the first time bob had heard it when he had went home that weekend from his boarding school to be with his mom and dad, gerard's picture had been showed on the 5pm news and bob's mom had cried. She said that the boy was too beautiful and to young to be killed he was only 16 years old, but to bob he didn't look that he was so innocent and frail for his age. And no one suspected bob or ray of killing little gerard and to all of bob's popular friends he was assumed innocent.
It was like an unsolved crime with a boy they had knew so little about, it was often discussed that since gerard looked so emo he had killed himself but his mom disapproved of that. Gerard was quiet not depressed and in no way suicidal, he loved dark things but he loved life more and he was just a all around happy person.
Month's passed and soon everyone forgot about him, his mom and brother moved away to california and the neighbor's sympathy wore off for him. But no one moved in his house or said anything bad about him, and bob and ray awkwardly continued life as they knew it, frank another friend of theirs and the most popular of all the kids in the boarding school didn't seem to care either, he didn't know of him why waste his time?.
Life was good for 15 year old frank anthony iero or better known as frankie, he continued to excel in his studies and continued to be rich and handsome. His mom and dad was the wealthiest of all the people of belleville and for that frankie had his own private home up in a secluded mountain top over looking the city. And like every saturday frankie went to that home and would spend his weekends alone there, and this saturday was the same thing.
Frankie awoke at 9:35 am in the morning after rushing to use the bathroom, deciding he couldn't go back to sleep he came downstairs and turned on his huge screen tv. Watching cartoons and eating cereal, frank was drowned into his lazy saturday morning routine until he heard something. This sound resonated through the blast of his loud cereal crunching, tv watching, and punk rock music playing.
It was the sound of a light outside his house being broken and hurried footsteps attempting to run away, frank became mad at this considering the fact of his parents strick rules of breaking things, so he came outside yanking open the door and looking out but nothing was there. But when taken a closer look frankie seen small bunny footprints and strands of black fur leading to his door and stopping, they were in the grass and led into his house tracking mud all over the floor. It went into the kitchen and stopped behind the counter, frankie was worried but not as much when he noticed something else.....
As the prints progressed throughout the house they became barefooted human foot prints of pretty and thin feet, and the worst part was frankie heard something else.
It was somebody in his kitchen crunching on his cereal, and humming a rather mysterious and lovely sounding tune.
Harrow here ta-da! what a good kick ass ending to the beginning of a wonderful story i just want to know should i continue with this or leave it the way it is you tell me i already have everything planned out!. In 4 reviews tell me of your answer and i will either update for you or leave it here either way it's your choice but please review guys alright bye!.
" Uhh " he would moan going lower and slower with every gentle hand movement he did, his groin would be on fire and the whole of his body would sweat but he wouldn't care he had to do this and he had to do it now. The boy was known as bob bryar but to others he was simply known as bobby and he was the most famous and most liked 17 year old football player in his boarding school, there was no one as good as him and no one to fit the part more than he did. Aside from being muscular and thick bob wasn't fat he worked out regularly and watched what he ate, he exercised with every chance he got and never led a sedentary lifestyle.
Bob was always up and about and because his mom and dad was filthy rich him and his friends could afford to do that. Bob was the most masculine kind of guy one could ever meet he carried weights around everywhere with him and was inlove with pro boxing and football, but bob had had a problem he had been gay for 4 whole years and it was known by none. It started when bob moved from chicago to belleville new jersey because he had been found out there by the teachers at his catholic school, they then kicked him out and the kids on his block began to make fun of him.
Bob was strong but the harassment his family suffered through was the point of his breakage, so the family moved to new jersey and bob became quiet about it he had had enough with that so he kept feelings like those to himself. But near his neighborhood stood the poor part of belleville that was some ways away, and at a certain time everyday bob would see this boy...a boy that made these gay feelings come back.
The boy was very delicate looking yet looked like he could be emo and punkish too, he had the darkest of hair that was so black and thick with blood red dye at the top and down the back, he had the most prettiest delicate olive colored skin it had highlights of baby pink in it too, and his eyes was simply gorgeous being hazeled and gold colored yet sometimes gray and at the right time blue and green too. He would wear black clothes and looked like a vampyre from out of a hot and romantic love story.
Bob was in a boarding school which meant he only went home on the weekend, but throughout monday to friday bob would sit outside his school and watch for the boy and his brother to walk by. Bob didn't know the boy's name but he was lovely all the rest and bob had liked him for 3 years. It was a crush at first but then over time it grew to something more and bob fell for him. Uuknowingly bob beganned to follow the boy home, but he only did it once the boy had lived with his mom and dad and brother and through other people's conversations bob would listen to what people had said about him.
The boy went to the local belleville highschool and was a very shy kid, he often stayed in the house when there was no school and would be sometimes spotted around the neighborhood but only when the sun wasn't out. In his school the boy was even more unnoticed, sitting in the back of the class with his head down hiding his face behind the curtain of his black and straight hair, the only thing he participated in was the art club and the chess club with his even nerdy but somehow more popular brother.
He smoked people said and survived off a diet of coffee and pop tarts, he could sing too and was what one would call a hopeless romantic. Lovingly gentle was what bob wanted someone to be with him so he beganned to buy the dark haired boy things, he learned that the kid liked comics and super heroes and action figures, so he would buy them and then leave them on his porch entitled with sappy and love felt things and words. But regardless of what bob would do the boy never noticed him, he didn't do it on purpose but he just never had the time and so bob with his love grew to borderline obsession.
Bob beganned to hate the boy's brother and hate the boy himself, he wrote constant letters of anger but never sent them and one year he actually made himself sick with thinking about him, bob beganned to have sexual fantasies about the little skinny, black haired boy and to deal with them bob beganned to frequently masturbate. In his school bob would excuse himself whenever he felt his impending hard on and would go to the bathroom and fantasize of the boy while doing himself, but one day ray had finally become suspicious of him and followed him to the bathroom.
Bob had just been finishing, coming down from off his ejaculatory high when ray entered the bathroom and questioned him on did he have a blatter problem?. Bob had been trying to answer but the sweaty condition he had been in answered for him, but after much denial bob broke and told ray what no one else had heard yet..." I'm gay ". After breaking to him ray and bob became closer and they learned more about the boy, but still the boy was doing the same thing ignoring him and bob became upset.
Ray then told something to bob that he just didn't want to hear that maybe this boy wasn't gay after all, but this only made bob enraged and he became so desperate to prove otherwise that one day while the boy was walking home alone bob and ray confronted him.
What was suppose to be a simple confrontation became a arguement and ofcourse ray took up for bob, they claimed that the boy was indeed gay and that he had been ignoring bob on purpose the boy never even knew who he was but that didn't stop them, and soon they beganned to hit him. They would hit him in the face saying that they would stop if the boy admitted he was gay, but he wouldn't so the hits became stronger and more random. But the boy escaped them and ran into the nearby park trying so desperately to get away, but bob and ray knew everything around here and they found him with ease.
When they caught up to him bob beat the boy down and dragged him into the nearby bushes, where he told ray to hold him down while bob " Tested " him. Bob did this by feeling all over the boy's skinny and pale body and gropping him hard inside his tight pants, he even kissed him and rubbed upagainst him but the boy did not get aroused he only screamed louder. Bob just wanted him to shut up, he just wanted him to want this as much as he did but the boy screamed and tried so hard to get away.
The boy's pouty cheeks had become red and his lips had been bleeding, and in his frenzied efforts to get bob off of him his fingernails had broken. But bob stayed put yelling at him to say that he wanted this but it was clear he didn't. And then it happened, some how the boy had managed to get out from up under bob and take off to run, ray screamed telling bob to stop him but the boy was skinny and way to fast, so bob did something he suddenly remebered he had brought along something with him.
It was a pitch black handgun that he had had, it was loaded with 3 bullets left bob shot the boy 2 times, one bullet hitting him in the chest and the other hitting him in the arm. It was as if in slow motion when the pretty boy fell and hit the ground right outside across the street from his home, he layed completely still because he had died on impact. Ray stood shocked, he didn't expect bob to shoot him he only wanted bob to go after him and stop him from telling on them, but now the boy wouldn't tell he never would it would be bob and ray's dirty secret forever...
After much contemplation they decided to dispose of the body by taking it somewhere and cutting it up and distributing the body parts in unmarked graves all over a far away cemetery. They did just that cutting the boy's pretty arms and hands off, then his legs then his feet, they attempted to cut off the head too but only got to the bone in the neck because they were both to freaked out to continue.
And on a pact the 2 made never to rat eachother out, they would die and go to their graves with their mouth's sealed about this no one could know. But all over the city and around the school's his picture was showed and everyone knew the name of the often invisible vampyre boy, his name was....Gerard way.
That was the first time bob had heard it when he had went home that weekend from his boarding school to be with his mom and dad, gerard's picture had been showed on the 5pm news and bob's mom had cried. She said that the boy was too beautiful and to young to be killed he was only 16 years old, but to bob he didn't look that he was so innocent and frail for his age. And no one suspected bob or ray of killing little gerard and to all of bob's popular friends he was assumed innocent.
It was like an unsolved crime with a boy they had knew so little about, it was often discussed that since gerard looked so emo he had killed himself but his mom disapproved of that. Gerard was quiet not depressed and in no way suicidal, he loved dark things but he loved life more and he was just a all around happy person.
Month's passed and soon everyone forgot about him, his mom and brother moved away to california and the neighbor's sympathy wore off for him. But no one moved in his house or said anything bad about him, and bob and ray awkwardly continued life as they knew it, frank another friend of theirs and the most popular of all the kids in the boarding school didn't seem to care either, he didn't know of him why waste his time?.
Life was good for 15 year old frank anthony iero or better known as frankie, he continued to excel in his studies and continued to be rich and handsome. His mom and dad was the wealthiest of all the people of belleville and for that frankie had his own private home up in a secluded mountain top over looking the city. And like every saturday frankie went to that home and would spend his weekends alone there, and this saturday was the same thing.
Frankie awoke at 9:35 am in the morning after rushing to use the bathroom, deciding he couldn't go back to sleep he came downstairs and turned on his huge screen tv. Watching cartoons and eating cereal, frank was drowned into his lazy saturday morning routine until he heard something. This sound resonated through the blast of his loud cereal crunching, tv watching, and punk rock music playing.
It was the sound of a light outside his house being broken and hurried footsteps attempting to run away, frank became mad at this considering the fact of his parents strick rules of breaking things, so he came outside yanking open the door and looking out but nothing was there. But when taken a closer look frankie seen small bunny footprints and strands of black fur leading to his door and stopping, they were in the grass and led into his house tracking mud all over the floor. It went into the kitchen and stopped behind the counter, frankie was worried but not as much when he noticed something else.....
As the prints progressed throughout the house they became barefooted human foot prints of pretty and thin feet, and the worst part was frankie heard something else.
It was somebody in his kitchen crunching on his cereal, and humming a rather mysterious and lovely sounding tune.
Harrow here ta-da! what a good kick ass ending to the beginning of a wonderful story i just want to know should i continue with this or leave it the way it is you tell me i already have everything planned out!. In 4 reviews tell me of your answer and i will either update for you or leave it here either way it's your choice but please review guys alright bye!.
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