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My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) ThnksbutiloveBobmore 2008-10-20
WOw. Your amazing.
You should work with the CSI team (on T.V (you could write the script))
:D
Great Chapter.
Finally they might be cleared.
And isn't the 3rd gunshot the guy who killed himself.
Ahah.Im so good at this dances
I really hope im right otherwise im gonna look really stupid. xD
Update Soon Please
Ello
XxxAuthor's response
Hi there Eloise,
Thank you so much for the compliment.
I wuv you!!
They may be cleared they may not be cleared.
Mark was shot three times, sorry.
You still are good though.
You'll never look stupid.
I don't when I'll get a chance to update maybe by Thursday or Friday.
Thanks for the review!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) alice93 2008-10-20
Haha, I bet it was Ali and Jim. Am I right? No...don't tell me...it'll spoil it. Great chapter, that's the only thing I can guess that happened. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! Alice.Author's response
Hi Alice,
I won't tell you, though I might write it in sooner than originally planned. It really doesn't effect the plot if you know sooner who shot Mark.
Boy are you going to be a little surprised.
Though the little part that was Jim's POV he didn't seem the murdering type, but we'll see.
Thanks for the review!!My Deadly Chemical Life (Sequel to My Simple Chemical Life)
(#) easykeys 2008-10-25
Dun Dun Dunnnnnnnnnnnnn!!
First of all don’t count your chickens before they’re hatched lmao I always say that !!
Loved this chapter so much, I agree with ThnksbutiloveBobmore you could totally work on CSi, you amaze me more and more with each chapter!
Cant wait for more :D
dondon xo.
P.S- I miss you tooooo, don't worry updates are gunna be more often now!Author's response
Hi there,
LOL!!!
Thanks so much,it really is getting close to the end so I wanted Holloway to finally start looking in another direction.
Thnaks!! and thanks for the review!!
P.S. I'm looking forward to it.
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