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What Have I Done?
9 reviewsJill returns to London but will Bob make it on time? I think this is the quickest i've ever posted a new update - hope you like it :)
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(#) easykeys 2008-10-20
First of all I just wanna say a quick thanks to the review you left on my 'notice of temporary resignation' made me feel loads better :)
Anyhoo back to this amazing story! I loved this chapter, it was lovely to see Justin (although I forgot who he was for a moment) protect Jill. And Bob and her are lovely!!
The way you wrote your authors note at the end makes it sound as if that was it, please tell me there is more :D
lotsa love,
dondon xo.Author's response
I'm so pleased you liked the message, not much fun when things at home are crap.
ha ha about Justin, i know i just kind of had him appear from nowhere.
So pleased you liked the update :) It would seem right to finish the story at this point if it wasn't for the continual new ideas that keep creeping into my head but i'm a bit worried about spoiling what i;ve already done. mmm decisions.Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-20
oh wow!
i cried!
i did, but hey i do that quite often! but nonetheless it was a fucking fantastic update!
i love how Justin and Ruth care so much for Jill.
really really very very good!
thank you!
oh and yeh i heard about the Leathermouth news. the lyrics are something else! have you checked their site? they have added the lyrics to "you're friends are full of shit" and "my love note has gone flat"
i am sure you know where it is but incase not:
http://leathermouth.com/badwords.htmlAuthor's response
They've updated since i last looked, i'm hoping that they come to the UK at some point, maybe do the festivals. I'd love that. I suppose it will depend on what MCR do next year. The lyrics are really powerful but kinda sad. I love I am going to kill the president - so true. If you like that one you should listen to Anti-Flag.
I got a bit distracted there lol. Thanks for your amazing review.Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2008-10-20
Hi there Neve,
Great updated!!!
I just love all the characters in this story. Ruth and Justin are great as her friends and protectors.
I really, really love how Bob and Jill finally came out and told each other their true feelings.
I hope there is more because I really love this story. If not I'm glad it had a happy ending. Though I read in a response to someone's review that there was more drama to come, so I'm keeping my fingers crossed.
Great job as usual!!!Author's response
Thank you so much, it was all a bit dramatic Jill and Bob. I'm glad you liked it.
I do have loads more ideas but i don't want people to get bored with it.
It might be a bit before i update again but hopefully something will be posted by the weekend.Deadlines
(#) moonpig 2008-10-21
Thanks for updating so quickly, so pleased to see Justin and Ruth back in the action again. I was laughing at Justin trying to get Ruth out of the flat and she's sitting there going "do we have reservations?" so funny.
I love the way you write Bob, keeping his anger in check brilliant.Author's response
Thank you so much, hurrah i made you laugh. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying my story :)Deadlines
(#) cutegirl12356 2008-10-21
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww finally!!!!!!!!!!!OMFG that was freaking amazing....MORE!Author's response
LOL, you crack me up. I'm so pleased you liked the update. Thank YouDeadlines
(#) Mrs_Stump221 2008-10-21
omg i love it i cried - wipes tears-Author's response
Oh no i feel bad but yet happy that you believed in it so much that it affected you in this way. Thank you so much for leaving a review. :)Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-22
"text"They've updated since i last looked, i'm hoping that they come to the UK at some point, maybe do the festivals. I'd love that. I suppose it will depend on what MCR do next year. The lyrics are really powerful but kinda sad. I love I am going to kill the president - so true. If you like that one you should listen to Anti-Flag.
I got a bit distracted there lol. Thanks for your amazing review."text"
haha no worries! i have heard a few songs by anti-flag. they have been going for a long time i think? thanks anyway, i will check them out.
yeh i have been checking every other day cos i knew they would put those lyrics up at some point. i love "i am going to kill the president!" great lyrics. definitely frank's alter ego coming out but you gotta release your bad feelings in some way!!
i hope they come to the UK also. with recent news, ie, mikey saying that they are on a LONG break i hope we get to see Leathermouth over here.
ok i am babbling now!! thanks again for the story!
Author's response
You have to check out Anti-Flag, i saw them at Leeds and managed to get into their later show too and it blew me away. Great if you're just wanting to get some rage out. Also going to see them in March - can't wait, they are touring with Rise Against and Flobots.
Damn you Mikey, i know they are on a break but i'm dying to hear something new. Mind you if a band ever needed a break it was them. Someone needs to knock Frank out before he collapses.Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-10-22
oh my attempt to HTML or whatever failed!!
you get my drift though!Author's response
LOL, i've been listening to Leathermouth for a while and i just want to download their stuff so bad - at least i know it's not too far away now.Deadlines
(#) disturbedangel6 2008-10-23
Hurray!!!
Again it was predictable but who cares these partrs are supposed to be like that!
Awesome
Update soonxxAuthor's response
Damn it, now i have set a challenge to myself to come up with something unpredictable. I do have something but it's a wee bit away. mm i promise to do better. LOL you keep me on my toes it's fab. :)
Thanks for reviewing and i'm so pleased you still like it.
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