- Hi there Dondon,
I really loved this chapter. Charli is just the cutest thing. I love how she interacts with Frank and Bob.
I think Ray needs some interaction too!!!!
I loved the last line it was so cute and she was so proud.
So looking forward to reading more!!!
Author's responseHey, Thanks, Im thinking of having a few more chaps then skipping ahead for when she is a bit older, gunna see what you guys make of that first though.
I know Im very bad for forgetting poor Ray. Im gunna write him into the next chapter which I am working on now
Thanks for your fab review!!
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