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• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) canustakemyheart 2008-10-24

  Awww! This is so cute!

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) Musicismylife 2008-10-24

  aaawweeeee that sooo cute ! :)
  great chapter
  and great story
  update soon
  -jana-lynn

  Author's response

  :)
  Thanks so much
  I will deffo update soon
  
  thanks for your awesome review!!
  
  dondon xo.

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) WeasleyTwinGirl 2008-10-24

  I literelly awwwwwww'd out loud, I love the ending! It's a really cute chapter ^_^

  Author's response

  Aw shucks XP
  Thanks for your lovely review!
  more soon I promise
  
  dondon xo.

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) Moonshyne 2008-10-24

  Hi there Dondon,
  
  I really loved this chapter. Charli is just the cutest thing. I love how she interacts with Frank and Bob.
  
  I think Ray needs some interaction too!!!!
  
  I loved the last line it was so cute and she was so proud.
  
  So looking forward to reading more!!!
  

  Author's response

  Hey, Thanks, Im thinking of having a few more chaps then skipping ahead for when she is a bit older, gunna see what you guys make of that first though.
  
  I know Im very bad for forgetting poor Ray. Im gunna write him into the next chapter which I am working on now
  
  Thanks for your fab review!!
  
  dondon xo.

• Brought Together, Torn Apart

  (#) neve 2008-10-25

  Bob is so sweet and Frank trying not to speak - ha ha.
  
  I can imagine Charli being fascinated by Ray's hair.
  
  I love this so much

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