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Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) neve 2008-11-02
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, i'm sensing the beginnings of something - so cute.
I really like how you write charli, she's so lovable and cute.Author's response
I think you sensed right XD
Im pleased you think Charli is cute :)
thanks for the review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) WeasleyTwinGirl 2008-11-02
Aww, it's 'bout time Gee gets a girl he deserves :D As always, Charli is freaking adorable! Can't wait for more!Author's response
I know right! Im so glad you think that
Charli is cute bless her
thanks for the review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) Moonshyne 2008-11-02
Hi there Dondon,
What can I say about Charli she is just so adorable. (Maybe we should hook her up with Bobby? If she's into younger boys LOL!!!)
It seems like Gee has a little love interest, which is so cool because I love Harper.
I was really scared that Jade and Rick might be waiting at the bus. Glad they aren't great update!!!
I loved it!!!
Author's response
OMG! That would be so good, they could crawl into eachothers story XD
Hmmm, maybe we could partner up and do a sequel about them :P
And yeah he does, I was really scared nobody would like it but thank lord you all seem ok with it :D
Did you read my mind? I was gunna have them outside the bus but I just couldnt be assed to write them in basically haha.
Will try and update tonight
thanks for your review!
dondon xo.Brought Together, Torn Apart
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-02
Jade and Rick need to like get deported out of the country or something! LOL
And I agree with everyone else that you have a knack for writing little kids (not that you don't have a knack for writing everyone else, 'cause you do, it's just Charli is uber cute!)
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