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Sometimes you can't help but remember the past and how some people never change - and that's a good thing!
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Californiacation
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-11-04
this is great! i love this story!
thanks so much for updating. looking forward to part 2!Californiacation
(#) kitkatpwl 2008-11-04
Ah!
There was so much that happened and yet you managed to make it flow together quite nicely - a rarity when you're dealing with that much plot.
Alicia calling Frank was really cute. I thought it was kind of funny too because he's supposed to be, kinda, the fucked up one, the one who can't keep a relationship together and yet, it seems like people have a penchant for coming to him for advice. It's just kind of funny.
Confirmation (again) that Gerard is drinking again, just breaks my heart. Seriously. I really hope that Gee and Mikey work their shit out because it's alarming how much of an effect parents actions and words can have on their children.
Now, the memory was a keeper!!! I'm a big believer that flashback should only be used if it further develops the plot or character and you have used it brilliantly each time - congrats.
I'd like to have Frank's shoes. Or jacket. hehe
I seriously hope that this little conclusion that Gerard has made actually goes into effect - do something about it!
I'm just completely in love with your story. THere's nothing else.
Update soon.
Cheers
Kat
Californiacation
(#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-04
OMG! You leave me hanging like that? grrr lol. I loved the update, Roflmfao Pirates is mikey's sexual fantasy! Im glad Gee kinda finally realised who he is meant to be with.
Update soon.Californiacation
(#) lilrainforest 2008-11-04
Oh my god... Jack is so cute (: I love that leather jacket thing, it's adorable, but it makes me sad at the same time. Like, Jack really does love Frank as kinda of like a 2nd dad doesn't he? I mean, like whoa.
Heh, Pirates. I need to find out what the fantasy is one day xD Casue right now my mind is processing very strange things. LOL, there's a lot of sexy pirates aren't there? =p
God I love this story.
Update soon please.
xo, RayCaliforniacation
(#) KirstinRevenge 2008-11-06
UPDATE SOON!!
please. no, gee should not drink! noo, i cant take it ;)
pirates, eh?
that could be kinky...
haha
great job
xo
KirstinAuthor's response
Awwwwwwwwww this next chapter will probably kill you then, sorry. xx
AHAHAHAHA! Love pirates (had to drag Mikey into it) muhahahaha!Californiacation
(#) Harrow 2008-11-07
omg there is so many questions in this story answer them already sheesh! anyway do the right thing dude put gee and frank together and stop this torment thankyou.Author's response
AHAHAHAHA! What are the questions? Ask them and I'll make sure they're answered, cause I might forget one or two, lol.
xx
And soon ;)Californiacation
(#) I-love-frank-and-max 2008-11-09
I went and watched 'I Don't Love You' :D
I'm such a nerd :]
What I love about your stories is that you write like really long chapters and several thing happen in one chapter.
Well update soon,
AggieAuthor's response
AHAHAHAHA! is proud
LOL! Yup, life is never dull, many things must happen. I'm so glad you liked.
xoxoCaliforniacation
(#) warwornlipstick 2008-12-08
AWWW
the whole thing about Frank's jacket,
and then the flashback with his shoe,
was genius:]
lovedittt.
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