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• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-12-08

  I know it said "not done" but I couldn't not read it. I can't believe Allie left Patrick ='[ Be sure to update again soon please!! =]

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) chocolatechortle22 2008-12-12

  u have to get Patrick and Allie back together there will be no story without her, and u got to get Andy and Joe in somehow

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-12-26

  Hmm... so I see your going to be re-arranging the whole story? Okay, I just need to know whether or not I should just completely start from the beginning or not to be up to speed. Haha and I too got a new laptop =]

  Author's response

  well..i've started some minor editing [putting the beginning of the story into allies pov as opposed to 3rd person] its gonna be the same story, only more well written with minor changes here and there. i might be adding a couple more chapters in the beginning about when they were young.
  
  what i am most likely going to do is erase the chapters since pete has died... and make him.. not die. haha. then just continue writing from there

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) chocolatechortle22 2008-12-28

  y r u bringing pete back? with him gone there was so much drama. but i dont mind its pretty cool that hes coming back and wat about madi?

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) thespaz 2009-01-02

  I am really looking forward to more! Hope to read more soon!
  ~the spaz

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) miss-slater 2009-01-11

  CAN U STOP PUTTING UP HALF CHAPTERS!!
  its reeeeeeeeeeealy lame.
  and y r u bringin pete back? he died wtf is he gonna come back as a zombie?

  Author's response

  1.i'm using a macbook, so i don't have a sufficient text editor. therefore, i am forced to work on this story by posting it on the site.
  
  2.i don't know,to be honest. i killed off one of the key characters in the story. i'm not sure if i will bring him back...people seem to dislike this idea.
  
  sorry for disappointing you?

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) thespaz 2009-02-03

  yeay i like where this is going. can't wait for the next chapter

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2009-02-05

  yay more of the new! im happy, did you accoplish what you were trying to do with the story? you were doing some major editing for awhile weren't you? ah, well i can't wait for more! =]

• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) xx_eddi_xx 2009-02-13

  awwwwwww!!! oh my god!!!!
  aw aw aw aw aw aw
  AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
  
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• Look For The Boy with a Broken Smile

  (#) chocolatechortle22 2009-04-09

  okay seriously u have to keep writing u cant just give up on a story that is NOT cool. people are ounting on u 2 finish

  Author's response

  I apologize, really. I sign on here a couple times a week but I never get around to updating. I'm reallyyyy gonna try to update this month, but I just got over having pneumonia for two weeks, and I'm in the process of moving and my classes are stressing the hell out of me. Soon, I promise.

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