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The truth
The truth
by
Inuyonas
1 review
Category:
Naruto
- Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Horror,Humor - Published:
2008-11-10
- Updated:
2008-11-10
- 234 words
-1
Illiterate
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Mairead
2008-11-10
Hi!
This is a great idea, but I think you'll get more reads if you improve your punctuation and capitalization. I'd be happy to help you proofread if you decide you want that.
--Mairead
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