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The truth

by Inuyonas 1 review

Category: Naruto - Rating: G - Genres: Fantasy,Horror,Humor - Published: 2008-11-10 - Updated: 2008-11-10 - 234 words

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The truth

(#) Mairead 2008-11-10

Hi!

This is a great idea, but I think you'll get more reads if you improve your punctuation and capitalization. I'd be happy to help you proofread if you decide you want that.

--Mairead

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