- Hey good chapter, i think you are right to have him tell her when he thinks she is asleep and to not be a hundred percent sure. It is much more realistic the way you did it than if he just told her after not knowing her that long.
Very good choice!!
Can't wait to read more soon.
(#) canustakemyheart 2008-11-18I think a lot of times after something crazy, big, and emotional happens (like getting in a car accident after a big argument!) that does speed people's feelings along ... you sometimes feel like you could die at any moment, so you might as well get whatever it is off your chest - or the event itself changes your mind about something. Either way, I like the way you did it.
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