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• Californiacation

  (#) lilrainforest 2008-11-18

  This was actually really sad but amazing at the same tiem. Like, I find it kinda funny how Frank's always looking for someone's approval. Like he needs to be told he's doing a good job or he's doing the right thing. It's just intriguing that he needs it, even when he's how old? Oh god, and that hooker thing was hilarious. I need to find out what happened cause Frank's out of cash. xD
  
  But the part with Don freaked me out, like I understand how he could be mad cause Gerard threw everything he had away, but like, they do make Jack feel like the luckiest kid on Earth, which is damn awesome. I don't know, it's hard for me to put all of this stuff into words cause my mind is severly messed up.
  
  xo, Ray

• Californiacation

  (#) HellOnHigh9 2008-11-19

  poor frank update soon this story is really good.

• Californiacation

  (#) lacerationgravityxxx 2008-11-19

  thanks for updating! i like the insight into Frankie and his relationship with Don.
  
  poor Don!!
  
  can't wait to read more!

• Californiacation

  (#) PossiblyInsane 2008-11-20

  Thank you for updating.
  This was very interesting, but most of it was flashbacks. Don't get me wrong back stories are needed, but try to update in present tense more often. It makes it more interesting to have something going 'in the now' more so than in the past.
  
  Other than that I really like this story.
  Post part two soon, please.
  
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  PossiblyInsane

• Californiacation

  (#) kitkatpwl 2008-11-20

  I remember this episode...I really liked it...I like your version better! hehehe
  
  I think what I like best about your story in comparison with the show (besides the fact that it's Frank instead of David Duchovny) is the flashbacks - I just absolutely fucking love them. They add this whole other dimension to the story that just seems so essential.
  
  The whole Don thing is really sad ... I appreciated how varied Frank's moods and thoughts were and it was cute that Gerard thought to send Bob and Ray to check on Frank, sweet that he was thinking of him, and even though Frank might not realize it, that little gesture means something! Through his own grief, he was thinking of you Frank!!!!
  
  You need to update pronto!!!
  
  Cheers
  Kat

• Californiacation

  (#) warwornlipstick 2008-12-08

  i really liked the flashbacks with Don.
  i enjoyed reading them.
  fuck it,i enjoyed the whole thing.
  
  anyways,
  this was amazing[:

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