- Hi there,
I loved it, I could feel Gee's anger and hurt throughout the chapter.
I love the whole tough love trying to make Frankie see what he's doing to everyone. Most importantly Gerard.
Now is Frankie brave enough to take the first steps in getting his life back.
(#) whitereflections12 2009-03-02This is familiar beyond belief, honestly.
Because a scene like this happened to me...except I wasn't bad enough to be in the hospital, and it was my best friend not lover...and she didn't do that in front of me. But the dialogue? Yeah...that was basically the gist of the conversation. Holy shit.
You captured this incredibly, incredibly well.
and yes, yes it fucking hurts to know you messed up that much when someone was trying to take care of you...and I hope Frank can fix things with him now...somehow...
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