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Chapter 2
23 reviewsSomething happens to Harry that summer break between fourth and fifth years.
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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Wolfric 2008-11-29
Good chapter. I presume that we will find out about the mystery pressence in the fullness of time. I like it when Harry is a bit more with it. Thanks for writing. W.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) jjracer24 2008-11-29
I like the direction, we rarely see wizarding traditions shown in a good light. Are you going to address why Harry isn't getting Lord training? Keep up the good work.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) scruffy1 2008-11-29
I'm a little late so this covers the first two chapters. I don't believe I've recently read such an interesting take on Hermione. All the action around Harry is interesting, not sure rather it's an older harry or just what in his head. But It's how your handling Hermione that will keep me reading or not.
All I ask is that you keep all of them real to how you write them... (Sounds funky but hard to do. I do not manage it often enough in my writings. but when I do and it's noticed, the grin is from ear to ear.)Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) DJ32 2008-11-29
Good chapter. I like your take on wizarding traditions. Also I like that Ron is not a total dumb a*s just keep Hermione from getting to far out there nd it will be all good. Great job keep going and thanks.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) jabarber69 2008-11-29
Hey another outstanding chapter, but I sure was hoping to see the trial this time...oh well hopefully next chapter will be the trial and his birthday and finding out about his heritage and the voice in his head...
P.S. since he himself is a future head of an ancient and noble house Potter and would have a seat on the wizengamot how come he hasnt been given a letter concerning his wizengamot in training? also since he is a last of the line of ancient and noble house why is he even being tried much less being put thru the crap of moving it from amelia's office to the full wizengamot! hopefull the answer will come next chapter...Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Wonderbee31 2008-11-29
Good part here, and really enjoying how things are turning out so far, though a bit sad that Hermione seems to be in the midst of roid rage for some reason, and going to be curious as to what will happen in the trial as well as the voice Harry is hearing.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Arinor 2008-11-30
So far well written and enjoyable to read. Please do continue in this vein.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) ROBERT_1958 2008-11-30
Great story.
Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.
Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a look at his parant's Original will(s).
Dumbledore needs to goto Azkaban for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.
In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys as well as at Hogwarts.
Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry.
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