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Chapter 2
23 reviewsSomething happens to Harry that summer break between fourth and fifth years.
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Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) demolition_funeral 2008-11-30
This is good... I like the way you took on Wizarding Traditions like that... awesome story all in all.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) SpringRaine 2008-11-30
Harry is a Black. Either his Grandmother or Great Grandmother was Dorathea(?)Black Potter. Making Sirius and Harry cousins.
Why isn't Harry being trained to become Lord Potter? Is it because he's a Half Blood or is it because of Dumbledore's interference?
What is causing Sirius and Remus to forget important things they need to do for or say to Harry?
I'm not sure who Harry is going to be romantically involved with in this story, but I'm hoping it isn't going to be Ginny, Cho, Pansy, Parvarti, Lavender or Hannah.
Hopefully we'll get to see more of Neville in a positive way in this story.
I'd like to see Harry make friends with Luna, more then he does in canon. I'm hoping that this will be a Harry/Luna story.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) kjd 2008-11-30
i like it sofar it seems like it will go somewhere interesting if you keep it up =]
good luck
and in reply to this "Author's Note:
I am also looking for a secondary Beta if anyone would like to have at this story please PM me" we can't PM you =P
if you still need 1 in a few weeks ill volunteer but i dout id be uch use to ya =P
keep writing
KarlHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) kjd 2008-11-30
i like it sofar it seems like it will go somewhere interesting if you keep it up =]
good luck
and in reply to this "Author's Note:
I am also looking for a secondary Beta if anyone would like to have at this story please PM me" we can't PM you =P
if you still need 1 in a few weeks ill volunteer but i dout id be much use to ya =P
keep writing
KarlHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) slashslut 2008-11-30
god i want to just throttle hermione!
another good chapter; i really like the amount of detail you incorporate in your story. Not too much to the point of it being overly dense but just the right balance to give you context.
looking forward to the next one!Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) growlerlight 2008-12-02
I like where this story seems to be going keep up the good work.Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) Vanir 2008-12-02
I like this. Who wouldn't need a little voice of reason, or one of knowledge and low cunning occasionally? I thoroughly enjoy the angle here that the Wizarding world is a Good Thing, and that the pureblood traditions are noble ones worth defending and adhering to. The Multiple-Cause rebel Muggleborn should really ask herself what she's doing at Hogwarts. After all, incantations and stuff are also traditional. Go Bash! And thanks.
VanirHarry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) GryffindorDragon 2008-12-05
Nice story so far. Though I think there is a bit too much hostility with Hermione. She may be bossy and a know-it-all, but is she really so mean and condescending?
Keep up the good work!Harry Potter and the Lord's Lament
(#) darkdeva 2008-12-16
AAAAAARRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHH. I need to know who this Voice is. It's driving me crazy.
I think Hermione's bitching is slightly unrealistic, but then again, it's not that implausible, so it's okay.
I can't wait for the trial. I'll give you 10 galleons if you update before Christmas.
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