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And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
10 reviewsPete and Patrick in third grade. Eventually Peterick, but not for a little while.
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And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) IceQueenz 2008-11-29
Haha I like it. I thought the ending was cute.Author's response
lol, thanks. it may take a while, cause i have wicked writer's block, but i'll try.And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) xFallxOutxBoyxFanx 2008-11-29
If you could continue it would be nice =]
I thought it was cute lol, i'd love to see how it continues.Author's response
Thanks. :D
and i'll try to update. (once i think of what to write, lol)And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) KuroNeko_ 2008-11-29
Heh, awesome story. So cute. x3 So pessimistic. e.e
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Thanks sour skittles!
im gonna think of what to write for chapter two, mmeanwhile, you shall update para-chem....please? lol.And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) sock_monkey 2008-11-30
Aww that was adorable. I think you should deffinately continue.Author's response
Thanks for the encouragement!
i'll try to get the next chapter out as soon as i can!And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) Emerra 2008-12-01
HI KRISTINE! I FOUNDS YOU! I'm so brilliant. xD I liked your story! I don't know why you didn't show it to me before!Author's response
lol, megan youre such a nerd.
i didnt show to you cause i think it sucks...duh? lol, thanks buddy. now i must think of what to write for the next chapter.And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) falloutboyrox728 2008-12-03
It's very cute. I can imagine little Patrick being a shy little nerd. ^___^
Please, THIS STORY CAN NOT BE A ONE-SHOT BECAUSE I WON'T LET YOU!
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(#) alex_-nods- 2008-12-05
awww this is really cute haha
you should definently continue!And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) Hellsangel666 2008-12-17
update plz plz plz plz this story could rock[it probably will]so plz continue with it.And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) PatbtrthnPete 2009-01-03
awe that was so cute. =]And Everyone Shakes to the Beat With a Barrel Down Their Throat
(#) Helloangel 2009-01-16
It was cute. The whole image of a little kid sitting alone on a park bench was disheartening. :(
I can't picture a third grader saying 'Jesus Christ!' though.Author's response
Haha, thank you! And yeah, it made me kind of sad too.
Lol, he's a weird third grader. I said in third grade, too. Oh no! Does that mean.....I'm weird???? Oh wait, I kinda already knew that...
XD
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x. X Kristine
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