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Time Travel is a Crazy Business, Harry
3 reviewsHarry has a little "accident" with a easily-swallowed Time-Turner. Yes, an "accident".
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Harry Potter and the Time Snafu
(#) bgoldnyxnet 2008-12-05
Sigh. Self-indulgence never pays... well hardly ever.
This was an interesting idea, spoiled by
1. Overindulgence in snide comments. I've seen this sort of thing done well, _Dead Like Me_ did it very well and _Pushing Daisies_ (by the same creator) somewhat less well.
2. Neither Harry, Ron, nor Dumbledore speaks with the "voice" that they had in the books. Jeran needs to study the word choice and sentence structure used by the different characters in Rowlings' books.Harry Potter and the Time Snafu
(#) ChiVayne 2008-12-05
“Harry, just decide between us, or we’ll hex your nuts off!”
The only response to this is "I must have both" (anime quote)Harry Potter and the Time Snafu
(#) ficbob 2008-12-06
Great touch meeting his parents
and darn funny kicking Wormtail and setting up Snape with Narcissa
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