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My Chemical Heart Will Go On
(#) KuroNeko_ 2008-12-07
Oh wow!
Oh my god i love it!
Its so amazing!
xD
Sort, but amazing...
I will hurt you if you don't keep writing~!
And that Alice girl can't have Gee-- hes MINE.
:D
xKuro//Sour SkittlesMy Chemical Heart Will Go On
(#) prettychemical 2009-03-13
Im not suprised about the whole Frank being one of the most popular names back then cuase like my grandpa's name is Frank, so lol :P
My Chemical Heart Will Go On
(#) Julianne 2009-04-05
Let's see... If you could break it up into paragraphs, that would add a lot to the reading. Makes it look much more professional, as well.
Didn't have too many complaints with punctuation - slightly distracting, bit considerably better than some of the garbage I've seen before. With some of the material on here, you'd swear it was written by illiterates.
Um, the first sentence was also distracting - too much detail (I have that problem, too) - but the rest came out pretty smoothly.
Out of ten, I'd give you a six-point-seven-five.
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