(#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-11Most excellent part here, and really enjoyed how things went with Odd and Ginny in the Chamber, and Luna's logical answer to his questions. Then he and Poppy looked to be building, and then she got the wind taken nicely out of her sails indeed. Looking forward to what happens next time with the meeting ith Sirius, and then maybe with Narcissa as well.
- I most definitely liked how he and Ginny managed to resolve amtters in the Chamber; hope they can go back and salvage all they can from that basilisk as 'twould be right proper revenge on Ginny's part for all she was put through. I thought the bit in the girl's washroom with Luna was a nice way of showing that he's not omniscient and is just as capable of error as the rest of us (hopefully he'll take that to heart in his actions). Meanwhile, I thought his answers to Poppy, Minerva, and Albus were nicely done and most certainly made his point. The question while he was checking the letter was amusing and 'twill be interesting to see how he and Sirius get on. In a way, I could see him opening up to Sirius when he wouldn't to anyone else and that could be good for both of them.
(#) draghknar2003 2008-12-12i like the way you have done the back in time story. most are based off of what we have read in rowlings books, then changed so that Harry will have an advantage, and still make everything work out better in the end.
this way, he is not trying to "marry, Bond, or Date ginny" just watching out fo rthe students, and making sure that he still lives a life to teh best he can. thanks for NOT writing another typical back in time story. great job so far
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