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• The Dark Light Within

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-11

  Great part here, and liked how Daphne and Tracey are handling things, and hope that they and Harry will be able to get together, as they never seem to get enough loving. Looking forward to what happens with Fleur at the Hall now, and the jealousy that might spring up from that.

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) draghknar2003 2008-12-12

  i like the fact that you have not pushed a relationship on us too fast.
  the fact of fleur coming to the hall? is this another harem plot? i hope not, your story has alot going for it as it is. and as for the ginny/molly conspiracy, it was done better than most, ty for not making a big drama of it right off the top. it is like wine, it should be enjoyed, not gulped. :D
  good job so far, and thanks for sharing the story. keep it up, and i will keep reviewing.

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) lycus 2008-12-13

  I am liking this story a lot and it looks like it will be a harem story, Wich I love even more. and i hope that Hermione gets added to the Harem and maybe the Patil twins.Remember Hermione has to have a reason for changing so much for Harry i think that she loves him even more than her books. And Ron and Hermione are better off as friends with out a romantic element.

• The Dark Light Within

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2009-05-04

  Good chapter.
  
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• The Dark Light Within

  (#) paulblay 2009-07-09

  None of the reporters ask "Why are you a foot taller?" ?

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