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• The Face in the Pool

  (#) thenewestmarauder 2008-12-20

  I love the story...keep up the good work

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) ficbob 2008-12-20

  Yep, nice smackdown on Snape
  If Luna and Hermione agree pay attention
  Looking forward to more

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) erik 2008-12-20

  A well written build-up and development of the storyline.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) bluehorse 2008-12-20

  Nice to have you back, it's been a while. Enjoying this very much.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) jiapa 2008-12-20

  Oh, lovely. I'm so happy to see you writing again, and I greatly enjoyed the first two chapters of this story. I liked his deal with the goblins and his rapid smack-down of Snape. I look forward to seeing what happens next, and to the Dumbledore confrontation.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Wolfric 2008-12-20

  I am still enjoying the story and I'm looking forward to Harry's chat with Albus. I usually like scenes where Albus gets the rug jerked out from under him, sometimes Harry even wins a verbal joust. Its hard for anybody to best Albus when he is in control but if you can distract him enough it might work. Thanks for writing, it is always good to hear from you. W.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Clell65619 2008-12-20

  - Great googly moogly Doc, you've been writing and holding out on us haven't you? This is great, though I can't see how you can wrap it up in a single chapter.

  Author's response

  Harry probably has more limited goals than you expect

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2008-12-20

  Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a skills and heritage test run on him, as well check for any magical Blocks and tracking devices on him or his thangs.
  
  Harry needs to goto Gringotts and have a look at his parant's Original will(s).
  
  Harry needs to get all people and all races and species to help him, as well as Harry helping them with Peace, and Equality between sentients.
  
  
  Dumbledore needs to goto Azkaban for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as the ilegial blocks and spells Dumbledore placed on Harry, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.
  
  In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys as well as at Hogwarts.
  
  Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.
  
  Hary neds to pic one or more of his homes to live in and move intoone of them.

  Author's response

  This version of Harry as little interest in any of that. He has limited objectives, and has at this point (end of chapter 2) everything he wants except for one little item Dumbles has.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) alec_potter 2008-12-21

  Very interesting story.Can't wait to read more....

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Himuradono 2008-12-21

  fantastic, but a bit melodramatic with the following Harry.
  You get points for Snivellus trashing.
  

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