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• The Face in the Pool

  (#) GinnyMyLove 2008-12-21

  So much better than a normal "time travel" or "redo" story. I like the premise alot.
  
  Cant wait for more. I DrT

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Meteoricshipyards 2008-12-21

  Wonderful Snape scene. I liked Harry's confrontation with the goblins, too. Thanks to the prophecy, he has what the goblins, ministry, and Dumbledore want; let's see their counter offers :-)
  
  Thanks!
  
  Tom A.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) whatareyouevensaying 2008-12-21

  Brilliant update. One thing I love about your work is how quickly things progress.
  
  Looking forward to more.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Wonderbee31 2008-12-21

  Good part here, and really enjoyed how Harry is going about things, including smacking down Snape good, and how the Order might feel about this Harry who is fed up with the half truths and outright lies and abuse they've helped with over the years.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) minerdude 2008-12-22

  I guess you are going to have Ron and Ginny ignore all the evidents of the first 5 years with respect to Dumbledore (ie either he is totally incompent or has an adjenda, which should give them pause to follow him)

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) captuniv 2008-12-22

  Interesting little discussion Harry had with the Goblins. Hopefully, he was able to rid the Hufflepuff's Cup of the Horcrux and I'm betting he did the same with Ravenclaw's Diadem those 5 minutes after he first entered the RoR after returning. Going to be neat to see where the discussion coming in Dumbledore's Office is going to lead. Wonder how much of his past he's going to reveal to the Order to distance some of them from Dumbledore. Loved the confrontation between Harry and Snape there at the end. Harry basically stated in no uncertain terms that he knows all of Snape's secrets and that if he doesn't rein in his actions in the future, Harry will basically not give him another chance. Love to see how Dumbledore will take that with his love of giving Death Eaters multiple chances while sacrificing his own followers. Wonder what Harry is going to do to Malfoy and the Death Nibblers in Hogwarts. I'm invisioning lots and lots of pain. Keep up the great work!

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) jjracer24 2008-12-22

  Great as always, loved the scene with the Goblins and the beat down that you gave Snape. I did like that you are pretty much keeping this cannon related with the one change. Great stuff, keep up the good work.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) DrT 2008-12-23

  Which git, noylj? Snape? As set up, it wouldn't be legal. The same way, harry could killed the escaped convicted Death Eaters in the previous chapter but not Malfoy.

• The Face in the Pool

  (#) Noylj 2022-05-30

  Why leave an enemy hanging when you can just vanish the garbage?

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