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The Gates of Hell
7 reviewsIt's the beginning of the end for our star-crossed lovers as the soul of Axl Rose is finally disposed of.
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First Date
(#) littlemissbrownstone 2008-12-20
How amazing would it be if Duff married you! This chapter gave me goosebumps, amazing visuals man! But my heart just dropped when Axl was finally gone. Amazing writing as always!Author's response
Thank you very much! It's nice that you always review my stuff. I apologise for being such a slacker with yours. It's not that I don't like it, it's just that I'm too frazzled right now to concentrate. But I will get around to it. :) Thank you again for reading! :DFirst Date
(#) your_michelle 2008-12-20
I don't know where to begin with this one! Well, number one: kudos for managing an update in the midst of the Christmas season which can get to even the best of us. Number two: is it really possible to be rid of Axl? LOL I mean, killing him didn't work but maybe bansihing him to hell will... And finally, number three: YAY! Duff marrying Izzy and Slash! That's bound to be a rare happy moment right? Amazing job with this bit, especially the imagery! I could practically smell the putrid odour of hell, although that could quite possibly have been my brother! xD Anyway! Loved it!! :DAuthor's response
Awww Thank you very much! I thought it would be a nice touch to have Duff marry them. I have a little plan in mind for that chapter but I have no idea when it'll get written (what with bloody holidays and stuff...). But thank you for keeping up!First Date
(#) sleeper 2008-12-21
I am like everyone else it is hard to know where to begin. The imagery was fantastic. The way you used Duff's charater was beautiful. I also cannot imagine finally getting rid of Axl. Great job.Author's response
Thank you very much! I'm looking forward to writing more of Duff! :DFirst Date
(#) roxy_foxx 2008-12-21
yay!!! update!!!! i wonder whu duff really is!!! and it's a good thing he's going to marry them. but ive got a sneaking feeling that axl's gonna come back, CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT!Author's response
Who knows if Axl will come back. ;) I don't. But thanks for reading! xxFirst Date
(#) luffuz 2008-12-22
YAY! AN UPDATE! I always get so excited when I see one. But wait... "the begining of the end" ?! NOO NOt a sad ending! Ill cry! But oh well I love it tons so far. quietly praying for a happy ending
- (guitar_Chic39) ON LJ.
I would have commented this on there but I saw it here first.Author's response
Never fear, my friend, I don't think it'll be a sad ending. :) After all they've been through I don't think I could ever give them a sad ending. :) Thank you, as always, for reading!First Date
(#) DefLeppardess 2008-12-22
Yay, update! This fic always manages to make me feel better when I'm down. As the others have said, wow. Amazing use of words here! I could feel poor Izzy's pain as Ms. Lucille dropped the bottle. Don't stress yourself too hard.Author's response
Thank you for reading! It's always nice when people read this piece of junk. :D And I'm trying not to stress too hard. Honest!First Date
(#) whiskeye 2011-06-12
you shouldn't use the name of actual people... this is just wrong, calling him evil and shit and killing him that way, what the fuck would you say if somebody wrote that about someone you know...
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