I like it. It's definitely a refreshingly different take on a popular idea. How long are you planning on making the story? I defintely see the groundwork for a good, long story!
This story is sooo cute. I love the way you've handled it. This is the best de-aged story I have ever read. This is also the first story I have ever added to my favorites without knowing for sure if it was complete. Thanks for writing.
Okay, what planet are you from. You, Dr. T, and Clonesserpent always seem to create these amazing ideas, and turn them into even better stories. You can't possibly be from this planet.
By the way, I thing dennisud had a good idea with shrinking Padma back to their age. It would make an interesting twist, and I'm sure that you would be more than capable of making it work.
Okay, I just thought of something that would be both hilarious and ironic. What if Harry and Tom figured out how to recreate the Marauder's Map?
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