ONE SHOT*holly and her friends are on a plane to america asking eachother stupid questions,but what happens when there idols hear there answers?
That was cute and funny. I especially like when Frank said Gee had the crush on him xD
you just need to work on your grammar and punctuation. You know like capitalizing names and such.
(#) neve 2008-12-30
Hey, i thought your story was funny and a great one-shot idea. Everyone needs a laugh at christmas.
You might want to check your spelling and punctuation (i suck at punctuation) because it would make the story easier to read.
Well done for a great idea. I was cringing for them when MCR were sitting behind them - so funny.
I really liked your idea and you made me laugh. Your story would be so much better if you checked it through the spell check. I noticed it had been rated as illiterate by someone - don't let that you get you down. You had a great idea and making people laugh is a gift in itself
i like it it made me laugh thanks lol
i agree with moonpig dont let people get you down by that!!you could check your spelling!!but part from that its a really good story,maybe more chapters?think about it.
May I steal your plot pleezzee?
Hey mirror mayhem,
Eh sorry havent been on this in ages moved across the world lol.
:) u wanna give me ur email? I dont have a prob with it, just want to hear about your ideas if that is cool??:)
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