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• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) bjthorpe 2009-01-13

  A good story, it seems fresh and different.
  
  Looking forward to more.
  
  Brian JT

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) glrasshopper 2009-01-13

  Another great chapter. I have to say that out of all the over-the-top Super-Harry stories I've come across, that this is the only one I have read that hasn't become boring after the second chapter. Keep up the good work.

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) PhoenixFrostweaver 2009-01-13

  Love your fics. Wicked chapter. Likin' the Horny!Hermione schtick. LONGER CHAPTERS!! UPDATE SOON!!
  
  There, basics covered... may I ask where you first heard the "Yea, tho I walk..." quote? ;D

  Author's response

  - I originally saw it on a black light poster circa 1974.

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) PhoenixFrostweaver 2009-01-13

  And whatever happened to that sweet-ass Dr.Who crossover you were writing? That rocked... sniff...tear

  Author's response

  - I've never done a Dr. Who cross, must be someone else's sweet-ass crossover.

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) huntsman345 2009-01-13

  Simply superb Clell!
  You outdo yourself once again.
  
  This is, without doubt, my favourite of your stories... no doubt my involvement in martial arts causes this (though I wish it were actually possible to do the things Harry does in this great tale).
  
  Although I deeply respect your policy of cycling your chapters so as to update each story and satisfy all readers, I do think you are onto something brilliantly original here.
  
  I will hope with my fondest hope that you continue this story with the same high level of skill and attention.
  
  Thanks for the work, it's truly inspiring.
  
  J

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) DrT 2009-01-13

  Excellent chapter, and in no way was it (or earlier ones) too long. The only problem with longer chapters is the greater length of time between updates.
  
  Like the 'outcasts' and Hermione's prior relationship with the twins. If anyone else has ever merged Volde with Fleur, I haven't seen it -- brilliant idea!

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) melferd 2009-01-13

  I really don't like to think how long my DH would consider an obscene amount of money for 'bride price' before his well developed "Dad sense" kicked in.
  Many things I loved:
  Susan's silly grin - girl needed some happiness!
  One job for the price of two- It's downright Goblin in practicality!
  Luna almost breaking Hermione's brain- as it should be in the proper world!
  Harry bitchslapping Snape, et al - Harry with a brain and a backbone-my world is askew with delight!
  Minerva and the feet- hugs scene with delight- Poor Min! worrying about persnickety details!
  
  I see absolutely nothing wrong with chapter size, except there could be more chapters!! Juicy, long, fun filled chapters that you ignore all the rest of your life to write daily!!
  What, a girl can dream..
  
  I could be prejudiced, but I'll bet our girl H would make it through all 12 steps, then have him go back and do it right when it felt real good.
  

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) rijlkent 2009-01-13

  Hiya, Clell,
  
  You're very generous giving credit for very small suggestions. I'm glad they did get through to you, even though they didn't post when I wasn't a member.
  
  It's always a pleasure to see an update!
  
  Best-
  -Rijl

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) captuniv 2009-01-13

  Another great chapter in the Sun Source saga. I love Harry's dealings so far with the Wizarding World. That said, can't wait to see more confrontations with idiot Draco and others of that ilk. Wonder what Cho Chang makes of her savior and the way he dealt with the Death Eaters, hope we see a flashback of the meeting between Dumbledore, Shaklebolt and Harry. Like the fact that Harry was able to squeeze some additional gold out of the Delacour's for the contracted hit on Voldemort, could see him getting more from others. As for your chapter lengths, I think they are fine just as you have them. Anyway, looking forward to your next installment! Hopefully soon!

• Harry Potter and the Sun Source

  (#) dellaran 2009-01-13

  I'll second JDE's comment - this story gets better as it goes along.
  
  I've seen other stories that use a similar plot device in which Harry is trained elsewhere and comes to Hogwarts with a mission to kill Voldemort and annoy Dumbledore. This story stands out among those, I think, because your Harry has such a well-developed personality; he can radiate badassery when he needs to, but he can also be friendly, polite, and gentle, and even a bit of a sexual innocent. That makes him a lot more fun to read than if he were a one-dimensional Super!Harry.
  
  I like your Hermione and Neville too, for similar reasons. I want to like Susan, but we haven't seen as much depth from her yet. I hope you'll give her more screen time soon.
  
  Your chapters start and end in good places, and there's very little waste in between. I'd say they're just the right length.
  
  Thanks for writing! I'm looking forward to more.

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