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• 17 Days

  (#) izziebella 2009-01-15

  Okay, Im back again. Yeah, I got my computer taken away once again, it's a long story.
  
  Anyways, I got caught up on everything and I really liked the last dream sequences tha you put in each chapter. I thought that the guy that killed the butterfly was really intresting. Maybe it kinda symbolizes self destruction? Or maybe I'm overthinking things again...
  
  Well I really like this chapter and the last one, I can't wait to read the next update.
  
  XO-Izzzibee

  Author's response

  Hey glad to see you back! And thanks for the review.
  
  That's a good way to put the butterfly. It could actually be taken a few different ways. One is also referring to the "chaos theory" bit where one action starts others in motion.
  
  xD

• 17 Days

  (#) Leah270193 2009-01-18

  Yes, I already know I reviewed this and I read it a second time. So i'll just say again I really love this story. This is more of a note though. I responded to your help with one of my stories and said I'd use it and credit you. I've decided instead to do it myself because even though I thought how you re-did my paragraph was great I want to do it myself. I just think it's a bit lazy of me just to use your's. Plus, I won't learn anything either. Thankyou so much for the help though!!!
  
  p/s I don't know if I'll go on that forum again, it depends. It's a lot of sorting out proxie sites and I can't get on to the chat room. You never know though....
  xxxLeah

  Author's response

  Hey that's cool!
  
  Don't feel bad about the forum thing. There's a couple people that have trouble connecting. But it's set up so that people can read stuff and not have to be logged in to.

• 17 Days

  (#) Sassy 2009-01-25

  I reviewed this yesterday, but it did the old front page thing and I didn't know if it had worked or not. Guess not! Here it is again...
  
  I'm thinking this chapter was all about perspective. Every day you still feel dreadful and you think you're getting nowhere, but comparatively you've made so much progress, but it's easy to forget because you're just getting through 'now'.
  
  Brilliant as ever!
  Sas x

  Author's response

  Oh I hate when that happens!
  
  And yes, it totally is about perspective in many ways.
  
  Thanks!

• 17 Days

  (#) neve 2009-02-01

  The voices are back, that’s some crazy fucked up shit going on there. It’s so good the way you describe what he is thinking and how he keeps questioning himself.

  Author's response

  I really liked how this one came out and am glad the "crazy fucked up shit" came through xD

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