- All the y's got annoying. IMHO, it's better to get speech patterns and accents across with word choice than with phonetic spelling, like when you called them "bities."
All in all, though, this thing is interesting. Can't say I haven't wondered what goes through a deathless man's mind when he's down in the icy black.
- I always wondered the same thing. Poor guy, stuck down there with no company but a bunch of fish. Maybe someone will finally rescue him in the sequel?
Author\'s Response: Problem is, if he was still down there at the end of movie one, he's a gonner. However, if you stop and think about it, odds are actually better that they used rope instead of chain. If that's the case, he may very well have gotten out...and oh, the possibilities are endless. evil chuckle
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