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Valeck's Tale
(#) tifastrife7 2009-01-30
Every chapter was excellent. Very well done. I could feel the horror of the castle and Valeck's life there. The thought of Frederick's head under the bed gave me chills. I'm sleeping with the nightlight on tonight.Valeck's Tale
(#) Shadow_on_tauntaun 2010-06-23
will there be more??
If not I kind of felt it "turned" rather quickly and a bit abruptly for such a long set up.
An epilogue perhaps would be nice to bind it off for me at least.
It's hard to swallow the cruel cold calculating nature of Valeck all the sudden ending with just the sudden demand of one person, you know?
It was an interesting story. Not my cuppa, but I loved the first two chapters. It was enough to get me to read everything so far.
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