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All Nightmare Long
8 reviewsI just realised only part of the update came through so i've finally posted the full thing - sorry. How do you tell someone you need them when your world falls apart?
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Deadlines
(#) easykeys 2009-01-29
Oh......My.....God!!
I cant believe he died =(
Just as things were looking up for poor Jill, that happened. I was almost crying when it said he had died. Im so glad Ruth is there to help her even though she feels torn between her and Jus.
Bob better get over there soon, I have a feeling he may not make it, or she will have gone by the time he gets there.
I just hope they stay together!
Cant wait for more Neve, I love it =)
dondon xo.Author's response
Thanks D for reviewing. I'm so grateful that you always read my stuff and leave a review. I'm being so evil to Jill at the moment.Deadlines
(#) disturbedangel6 2009-01-30
Omg! This is so good!
I mean the part where justin is in the hospital and when she hears that her dad died would so make me laugh but I didn't
It was just realistic!
I love it
Please update soonxxAuthor's response
Thank you so much, i'm so happy you thought it was realistic. Thanks for sticking by me and the fact you are still enjoying it - :)Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-01-30
oh my God! poor Jill!
really well written, it got me emotional!
can't wait for more. thanks so much for updating!
i have run out of ratings points! there are too many good stories around at the moment! which is a good thing, but all my points have gone!
sorry bout that.Author's response
Don't worry about the ratings points lol. Thanks for leaving such a nice review. I'm working on the next update :)Deadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2009-01-30
Hi there Neve,
What can I say? That was so sad, a real emotional rollercoaster. I hope Bob gets there on time and can be there for her.
You have no idea how excite I was when I saw that there was an update!!
Great job as usual.Author's response
You know i've just realised that my update missed out half of my update. I've updated it now. I was wondering why people were saying "i hope Bob gets there on time" sorry about that. So good to hear from you again,Deadlines
(#) HellOnHigh9 2009-02-01
cries poor Jilly I feel so bad for her right now.
UPDATE SOON!
XO CaTAuthor's response
Hey Cat, thanks for the review, i've updated the chapter because ficwad messed up again. I hope it makes more sense now :)Deadlines
(#) easykeys 2009-02-01
Loved the second bit too!!
I feel so bad for Jill but Im pleased Bob is there.
Ten chapters would not have satisfied me haha!
I will be sad when its over =(
Cant wait for more neve!
dondon xo.Author's response
Thanks for reviewing again. What an idiot i am? i should have checked that the whole update went through but i trusted ficwad - duh!
I'm kinda sad about ending it too - i need to think of something good :)Deadlines
(#) lacerationgravityxxx 2009-02-02
hey thanks for the extra update.
i don't want it to end though!
hey maybe you can to a sequal at some point??
thank you.Author's response
Thanks for reviewing, i love reading reviews.
I still haven't reached the main kind of plot that i originally had before i went of on a tangent so i could do a sequel. temptingDeadlines
(#) Moonshyne 2009-02-05
Hi there,
I too loved the extra bit.
I'm going to be really sad when this ends as it was definitely one of my favorite stories.
Looking forward to more.Author's response
thank you so much for such a lovely review. I'm hoping to post a new update by the weekend. I can't tell you how nice it is when someone really enjoys what you write. You made my day :)
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