- uhhm... Mikey's a little Bitch!! buut... coolio on being first comment and great story, although the cicheness is pretty intense. :) i like it though... as uncliche as i try to be, i like cliche stories. although, my first kiss was under an awning snuggled up during a rain shower in the moonlight... damn... that IS cliche. :\
Author's responseYou'll find me apologizing a lot for being so cliche in my writing; I spent last weekend re-reading this story now that I am 4 years older, and fuck, how retarded I was. Glad you like the story though; I'm surprised I remember my UN/password
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