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The Incredible Change
(#) Ithilwen 2006-03-24
A run through spellchecker would do this chapter some good.
So far this story is okay as a scriptfic, but you might want to look up some playwrighting style manuals. It might help you describe your scenes.
Just call him "Jimmy" from the start.
Author\'s Response: spell checker is one thing i dont have on my hard drive but i'll see what i can do thanks again ^_^
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