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The invisibility wears off
11 reviewsA cute guy who cross-dresses and a guy who mistakes him for a girl and asks him out. Yaoi, smut, and all around greatness. (No smut in this chappy)
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Not titled yet
(#) Lyanvis 2008-10-13
The beginning is Okay.
as a title, I would call it Consummate Feminity.Author's response
Cool. Thanx for the review, and I'll consider the title.Not titled yet
(#) No_Leaf_Frantic 2008-10-15
I love it. Very interesting. My opinion for the title would be "Treat Me Like A Lady" or "Cross Love".Author's response
Thanx. I like your title choices too.Not titled yet
(#) MCR_dynamite 2008-10-29
Aw, that was great. A little cute, too :) I love the idea, I'm not sure that I've ever read anything about a guy that dresses like a girl before.
I'm sorry, but I'm not good with titles. Idk, maybe...Dude Looks Like A Lady? Lol, I'm sorry, I'm not good at this.Author's response
That's okay. I'm kinda looking for a cute title. I've always wanted to write a story like this, and it was my first time doing it, so I'm glad you liked it.Not titled yet
(#) Lyanvis 2008-11-14
a cute title? maybe something like
I am what I am tonight
Crossed against love
dynamo woman
or you could put his name then his assumed name.
I can't remeber, it's one thirty in the morning and i'm brain dead but say his name is shawn and the name he assumes is shawna then it'd be
Shawn/Shawna
Jack/kimberly
etc. I didn't reread it because you need help with formatting- but i wouldn't mind betaing. and i replied to your forum post. though please- don't post the same thing successively like that- it irks people and most won't even read it when you do that. if i sound like a jerk, blame the lack of sleep, and sorry.
hands-
LyanvisAuthor's response
Okay, and for the title idea. I might actually use that. I really never thought to do that.
Sry. I meant thanx for the title idea, oh, and thanx for the review. I'd love for you to be my beta.Not titled yet
(#) Hellsangel666 2008-12-15
plz update soon plz plz plz plzAuthor's response
Don't worry. I'll update as soon as I get the chapter done. I warn you though...all of my stuff is pre-beta'd, so you might find some spelling errors.Not titled yet
(#) Hellsangel666 2009-01-08
don't care if there is any spelling mistakes.Need new chapters ASAP.love it so far.Not titled yet
(#) Gravitational 2009-02-01
Update soon pweases!
TT! i might of supence!
~heart slowly stops beating~ TT
Author's response
lol. I'll update soon, I swear. Don't die just yet. U wanna read more right?Not titled yet
(#) Emmsiebabe 2009-02-21
Please update soon. Or i might die and be buried next to Gravitational. ~Sob!!~
T-TAuthor's response
No! You can't! You're the only consistant reviewer that I have! Plus you seem like an awesome person, so you must live! lol
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