Categories > Original > Drama
(#) HellOnHigh9 2009-03-01Genius is all I have to say, That dream was so vivid its like your living it, its fucking crazy. I loved how he tore the guy apart it was so sadistic yet satisfying at the same time.
Another job well done.
Author's responseSadistic yet satisfying ... indeed xD
- First rule of kidnapping - never untie the hands! Rookie mistake! lol!
You know I like a nice bit of twisted! Excellent job, so real and urgent - I couldn't read it fast enough!
I was wondering what you were gonna say about this one! You didn't disappoint.
(#) iwillstakeyourheart 2009-03-01*sniff*
"I tried to sit up quietly, not wanting to disturb the woman lying beside me – my wife. I would bear any burden for her but at the moment my façade had crumbled and I needed to just hide from the world."
Author's responseI know :(
(#) somethingorother 2009-03-01Damn.
You always amaze me with your writing. Totally jealous...
This was so real feeling. Does that make sense? I felt like I was right there in the dream.
Author's responseThank you xD
I'm glad it had that realistic feel to it.
(#) IeroMyHero 2009-03-02MINISTRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! My favorite album besides maybe Twitch. Man, I didn't think I'd find anyone who listened to them! I saw the title of this story and I just freaked.
Anyway...this story was (obviously) amazing. And I don't mind how twisted it was because well, you know. I personally don't think there should be more because this was just...perfect, goddamn it! Very good imagery and like very good everything.
I'ma turn this green.
Author's responseYou get a cookie! My fav album is Twitch as well though.
Thanks for turning me green and for the awesome review xD
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