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Eclipse's Thoughts

by Rusheen 1 review

One-Shot if you are not in with the whole m/m thing then don't read this cuz this is a Eclipse/Raenef fic. First this is a Eclipse POV soo arg i soo suck a summaries.

Category: Demon Diary - Rating: R - Genres: Drama, Humor, Romance - Warnings: [X] - Published: 2006-03-24 - Updated: 2006-03-25 - 234 words

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Eclipse's Thoughts

(#) Snapped_Chopstick 2006-05-28

Please please make more paragraphs! I think if you plot out the direction of the story more you could do a lot better. Make paragraphs, expand more upon ideas, etc. I love the pairing! But please, try building up to things. :)

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