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5 reviewsIt needed a little round-up. I think it's quite funny, but decide for yourselves. ^^ AN inside too.
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You Make Me Live
(#) rawrlittledino 2009-03-10
Joe got pregnant.
That's what happened.
I loved this story, I'll be waiting impatiently for the sequel :)Author's response
HAHA. I just loled. xDYou Make Me Live
(#) falloutboynumber1fan 2009-03-23
I think Joe had his time of the month.
tisk tisk.
either that or he was out finding some girl jeans that fit perfectly.
lol sorry. I've been playing the FOB TRAIL game to much . . .
I LOVED ITTTTTT!
(especaily the end =])Author's response
=O Isn't that game amazing?! I can only get about halfway before everyone dies, but Patrick dancing in pink underwear for money is enough for me to keep playing xDYou Make Me Live
(#) falloutboynumber1fan 2009-03-23
I think Joe had his time of the month.
tisk tisk.
either that or he was out finding some girl jeans that fit perfectly.
lol sorry. I've been playing the FOB TRAIL game to much . . .
I LOVED ITTTTTT!
(especaily the end =])You Make Me Live
(#) areyounormal 2009-08-02
I only just started reading/writing FOB fics. I'm so glad that you reviewed mine as I checked out what you'd written and picked this one. I may never have found it otherwise.
Let me tell you, it was beautiful!!!! So well written and really really natural. Great dialogue and trust me, that's a gift!!
Brilliant! Absolutely loved it!
Sas xAuthor's response
Aw, thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Your comment's inspired me to go and write the next chapter for the sequel, and try and make that story of the same standard as this one :D
P.S. I'm looking forward to the rest of your 16 Candles fic... (please don't kill Patrick! -bites nails-) :DYou Make Me Live
(#) Sammy6618 2009-08-13
I absolutely loved it! It was really sweet yet realistic! I just found this site a couple days ago after I got annoyed that fanfiction.net doesn't have much in the celeb fic catagory:P I love writing fanfiction too, once I stayed up til 6am finishing up a chapter, but mine is not as good as yours since I tend to use words like "while" and "said" too much, and I'm unable to write ANY fall out boy fiction(I swear, it's like a disease where I get a horrible case of writers block whenever I try) and I can't do angst very well since I am very humor based. This has got to be one of my fav FOB fics! I'm gunna go read the sequel now :)
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