(#) shehadtheworld12 2009-03-11ooh creepy how Gerard is seeing Ray,but i kinda laughed when see said "dont wave!" :] I really like this story and can't wait for next chapter.....
Author's responseThanks!! I'm glad you're enjoying it, I'm also glad you laughed, it was supposed to be funny, but I'm never too sure of my humour writing - it's always a bit on the dark side!
(#) nadialexandra 2009-03-11Despite the serious[ish]ness of this chapter, I totally fell off my loft-bed laughing when Gerard yelled at Ray saying "Don't wave! He can't see you, you clown-haired freak!" [or something of the sort] My ass is now in pain. ;-;
But ROAR! I want more. Now.
And I want to know what the thought of the blackmail 'deeply embedded' in his mind for it not to be paranoia.
Author's responseAwww! I'm sorry! But I'm kinda laughing too!
The thing with Gerard and the blackmail, is that he truly believes the guys were blackmailing him to stay in the band (this refers back to the last 2 chapters of Such Bad Boys) with some video footage of him doing 'something bad' that would have him jailed. He's since been told that the evidence he keeps talking about that they were supposedly blackmailing him with, doesn't exist and never did - once by Bob and now by Simmons. His paranoia won't let him believe it and is in fact imagining it's a trick of some sort.
Of course the irony being, he was eventually arrested because of some video footage of him doing 'something bad'.
He's very messed up.
Thanks for reviewing! I'll be starting work on Chapter 3 today.
(#) mcr_rox_42495 2009-03-14Great story. Kinda disturbing though... in a good way! :]
Update soon please! xD
Author's responseHi Michelle!
I'm really glad you're enjoying it! Chapter 3 is up already - you can't get to it yet via the drop downs/arrows though (don't know why that happens sometimes) but you can get to it from the main menu - or, from here - http://www.ficwad.com/story/118971
Thanks for reviewing!
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-03-18Mwahahaha serves him right that he's seeing Ray...
I agree with Moonshyne. I LOVE reading this >.<
Who seriously ever though Gerard would see dead people. Sometimes I wish that I could see them.. Like in that one movie, The Uninvited. Watch it sometime if you haven't already ^_^
Author's responseThanks!! Things are going to get worse for our lovely singer, but will that have other consequences?
Thanks for reviewing!
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