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Pevie
(#) rawrlittledino 2009-03-15
OH DAMN
ANDY DIDN'T EVEN GET A CHANCE THIS TIME ROUND.
Haha
I think your secks writing has improved too, but I think Pete got all mushy in this version.
I SWEAR IF YOU'RE MAKING THEM SEX EARLY JUST CAUSE YOU'RE GETTING HER PREGANT JUST SO YOU CAN KILL THE BABY I WON'T BE HAPPY.
Just don't kill Alex. hahaha
IT WAS WORTH THE WAIT :DPevie
(#) silver_stripes 2009-03-15
Pete being mushy? When did this happen? Your secks did get better this time around though.
Promise you'll keep the drama coming in this one? As much as I was upset with the baby drama in the original, the drama always kept me coming back for more. Either way IPevie
(#) XxLiveyourlifExX 2009-03-17
SEX!!!!!!! LOTS AND LOTS OF SEX!!!!!!!!
haha very nice chapter...can't wait for more drama!! ((please don't kill the baby))
Love,
CorriPevie
(#) somethingorother 2009-03-22
I just started reading this and I love it!!
Paul is a creepy asshole who needs to be locked up.
How cute is that that although Evie is kinda resisting liking Pete, she takes a bullet for him.
I hope Evie doesn't like regret it in the morning or blow Pete off or anything. They are cute together!
Update again soon!!Pevie
(#) alisaysroar 2011-04-29
I AM SO SUPER LATE ON THIS ENTIRE STORY, BUT MY CREYS THIS CHAPTER WAS SO GOOD. I CAN'T EVEN.
AND I'M WRITING THIS AFTER I'VE READ THE ENTIRE THING, BUT I REALLY LOVED THIS ONE PART.
Seriously, this was my favourite part of the entire story and just the way Pete acts and how guilty he feels and how Evie finally lets her guard down and exposes herself.
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Good work!
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