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This is a narrative about some of the strange stuff that happens at my house. All of this is the truth. This was actually an assignment for college writing, but I thought I'd share.
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House Strangeness
(#) RenoTurk 2009-08-27
You said you would like some candy coated feedback and I will cos honestly I read it and liked it. You have something very interesting to talk about and the descriptions are helpful too. I think as a first time submission it's not a bad one either.
Okay so here goes with a little helpful (I hope) hint, break up the paragraphs a little more, it helps for online reading if they are well sspaced and people seem to keep concentration easier. At least that's what I was told and it helped me. Good luck!
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