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• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) biged78 2009-04-10

  So Harry is gifted a Bat'le'th by Worf's family. Interesting

  Author's response

  Well, not Worf's ancestors, different pronunciation. but it is a nice thought.
  
  Rob

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) DrT 2009-04-10

  Interesting, but I am wondering if there is any magical community left!

  Author's response

  Yes there is, but lets just say that things have drastically changed from Harry's time. All will be revealed in a few chapters. I've got to keep people on their toes so to speak :)

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Cateagle 2009-04-10

  Heh, I liked the leave-taking from the Enterprise, that was most affecting yet straight forward. The gift of the Bat'le'th was rather interesting (I think Harry may have a larger effect on Federation-Klingon affairs than he ever expects - if it goes back with him, imagine how a Bat'le'th would disconcert Tommy-boy and the Deez). And lest anyone question whether a human can become proficient with one, I know a lady who is quite proficient with one and I'd not care to get on the bad side of her or her husband (both are quite capable fighters).

  Author's response

  Oh you have no idea of how that little gift will affect Federation-Klingon relations. Quoting my wife and her creative writing class "The gun is on the wall and it's loaded. Now I have to use it." and believe me, I'm gonna be using it in a big way much later on.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Marius_DeJordan 2009-04-10

  I really love your story. It' so unique. i.e. Harry as an Klingonwarrier? Thanks for sharing and a happy Easter.
  
  Greetings from Germany
  
  Marius

  Author's response

  Unfortunately no, but lets just say that the gift from the Klingons is going to have some serious repercussions later on in the story. Happy Easter to you any your family as well. When I was a baby I lived in Germany as well. My father was stationed there at Bitburg (I believe that was the name of the Air base). I don't remember much except A lot of Pine Trees.
  
  Rob

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) dennisud 2009-04-10

  Great saga so far. I'd like tos ee how he makes his way through this reality, his hunting for information about his time and whether the prophesy will draw him back or not to face Tom Riddle!
  
  dennisud

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2009-04-10

  It would be good if Worf trained Harry.
  
  I would like Harry once back on Earth to find some of his friends descendants, like, Luna, Hermione, Delacors, Weasleys, Dobby, Griphook, Etc.
  
  I hope Hogwarts is still standing.
  
  I hope Gringotts is still standing and Harry has loads of thangs still there.
  
  
  Great story I am looking for more.
  
  

  Author's response

  Unfortunately, Worf isn't even alive yet, and the Klingon family is a different one than Worf's (different pronunciation and slightly different spelling of the name. Kinda Like the Last Names of Nielsen and Nielson. slightly different spelling and pronunciation.) Hogwarts is still standing and Gringotts is still there as well, but not in the manor that you may be thinking. Harry will be finding out what happened in due time, but for now he's going to have Lots of questions but very few answers for a few chapters yet.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) ROBERT_1958 2009-04-11

  I hope I can add to my review.
  
  I have a few thangs that might help add to this story.
  
  1) I would like Harry trained by Worf any anyone who knows how to fight.
  
  2) Have Harry and and anyone wanting to help defeat Tom Ridle board the U.S.S. Enterprise and use the slingshot efect to send everyone onboard back to Harry's time to fight Tom.
  
  

  Author's response

  Getting training to use the Batleth is going to happen but is going to a chapter or two befor that occurs, so he's going to have to do self training first. AS for getting the Enterprise to go back in time to help defeat Tommy-boy, your on the right track, but not quite in the manor that your thinking.
  
  Rob

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Elfwyn 2009-04-11

  I like the idea of Harry training to use the Klingon Bat'le'th, and like Kirk having that warrior spirit that his mother must have help foster. As well he will have a smart younger brother to play with.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) JaCeeisme 2009-04-11

  Excellent Fic so far, Rob. Loving every minute of it.

• The Wizard on the Edge of Forever

  (#) Cateagle 2009-04-13

  Ah, yes, your wife and her creative writing class citing Anton Chekov's Law (as opposed to one by Pavel Chekow, with might also be applicable here). I'll be very interested in seeing how that one act affects events. I wonder, are they going to return him to that time machine and send him back that way or do you have another approach (I do have to wonder just how long that timesand will keep him there). Odd thought, will he have trouble keeping secrets from Hermione when/after he returns?

  Author's response

  Well, I am using a different approach in dealing with time and sending Harry back. I has been used before in the series, but it will be a bit before Harry goes back. Keeping secrets from Hermione, yea right like that's going to happen. remember its hurricane Hermione when shes after information. I do have a roughed out part dealing with this. But like I said it's real rough and its possible that I may not even use it.

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