- Well, now, this one definitely looks like a very promsing one. I do love how the Doctor's socialized Harry; wizarding England won't know what hit it. It should be rather interesting to see the reaction of someone like Hermione, assuming that she survived that first-year troll without him, to his laptop working there, especially if/when she finds it running rather better than it should anywhere.
- very nice start,
Will be interesting to see where Harry ends up sorted.
Love seeing a smart adjusted Harry.
I actually liked the pace of the start. Some people develop a Super!Harry that spends 3 weeks in Diagon outfitting himself for WW3. I also don't like it when you get a book describing the clothes, trunk, etc. and every atom of their makeup and how they are so Super!
(#) twistyguru 2010-05-27oh, ho! very nicely done, with just the right tone to Harry after growing up with the Doctor.
Judging from the other reviews, I'm not the only one who would like to see this single chapter developed into a complete story. Oh, poor Death Eaters! After the Daleks, and the Cybermen, they would seem like such small potatoes.
Kudos to you for this wonderful short piece.
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