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the happy ever after
5 reviewsharry potter walks the corridors of hogwarts late one night and gets a shockh
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the happy ever after
(#) fic_reader1 2009-04-20
depending on where you go with this it could be inerestingthe happy ever after
(#) Camster 2009-04-21
Im hoping that this will turn out to be a crossover, since this is sounding like a number i have read. As long as it's good, i will gladly read.the happy ever after
(#) anakhuskerfan 2009-04-21
Really interesting start, you could take this fic in almost any direction. Hope you update soon, can't wait to find out what the shock is.the happy ever after
(#) FreakyRufus 2009-05-14
You have very, very poor grammar skills. You apparently do not understand the concept of sentences, since you don't have any. You use no punctuation, other than a few periods at the very beginning. You do not capitalize words correctly. Proper names (such as Harry, Ginny, Ron, etc.) should be capitalized. The first word of sentences should be capitalized. I was going to rate this story, too, but apparently it can't go any lower than it already is.
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