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• Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

  (#) juanjoseso 2009-05-21

  good start they should have more ofen girl harry the ones they have in the other site never finishes norm al always dropped

  Author's response

  You'll be happy to know this story already has a plotted ending, and four more years to go until then.
  Thanks for reading!
  wh

• Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

  (#) Bronze 2015-09-12

  I do hope you have Holly figure out just how untrustworthy Dumbles is. As he will betray her and Harry in an instant if it suits his " Greater Good ". Maybe he should kill himself for his greater good. It'd save the magical world of Britain a whole lot of pain, death and just plain trouble.

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