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• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) snapehater 2009-05-17

  good story well done
  
  please write more :)
  
  i've read a few Harry and Gabby and i must say this is in the top 5 well done again

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) darkfriend 2009-05-19

  Beautiful...fantastic writing style, engaging and descriptive, and scintillating sex. A truly great start.
  
  Now, I'm curious to see where you go from here. Has Harry gained some kind extrasensory perception for females through the bond as the first part of the chapter seems to indicate? Or was that just the lust addled mind of a horny teenager playing tricks on him.
  
  Please continue writing this story.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) NoOneInteresting 2009-05-19

  Thanks, I'm glad you're liking it.
  
  Does he have extrasensory perception for females through the bond? Except for Gabby, no. He gets a bit of her arousal fed back to him (she gets much more of his) and he can sometimes get a hint of her emotional state. He also has an above average desire to see her safe and happy. He may also pick up certain facts about her that he wouldn't have otherwise known (like her age). But again, it's only with Gabby.
  
  With other girls, he can (once he really learns to control it) use his "pull" to arouse them, but he can in no way feel their arousal.
  
  NOI

  Author's response

  Oops. This was supposed to be a response to darkfriend's review. That's what I get for not paying attention.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) bluezone 2009-05-22

  Well put together so far, but it would be nice if he could get off the loli train as well.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) koppe 2009-06-01

  Great story! I've really been looking for good Gabrielle stories... and an added bonus, is that it's playing out in 4th year and that Gabrielle isn't "really 16, she just looks eight".
  
  I'm looking forward to Harry's summer visit if France -- as well as the reaction of the Durselys. Also, what will happen at the end of the tournament, if Gabrielle is almost always following Harry around?
  
  I would also hope Harry use his gift to get into Hermione's knickers (as well as many other girls)... although I guess he and Gabby will need to spend some time explaining how the bond is not slavery. I also think Harry shoul "appolegize" to Hannah... ;-)
  
  Very hot and very well done.
  
  One thing though, I would love if you made an alternate story, where it's a normal wedding-bond that's initiated, and Gabrielle stays visible (but usually not naked).
  
  Harry has deal with being married to an 8 y/o -- from friends, students, professors, their family and the wizarding world... and defend her from the likes of Malfoy. Harry will also be her guarding and father-figure, as well as lover and husband. Preferbly with Harry maintaining the pull.
  
  Keep up the great work, and update soon.

  Author's response

  Glad you're liking the story so far. I like Gabrielle stories too when they're done well. Too many authors choose to fudge her age--even the sixth-/seventh-year Harry/Gabby stories usually bump her age up to 14 or 15 or even older. I thought it would be interesting to write a Harry/Gabby bonding-after-the-second-task story that didn't mess with her age and make it readable.
  
  Sadly, we're not going to get to see Harry and Gabby's trip to France since the story is only going to cover a few more days. This was never meant to be a replacement for the canon story after the second task, it was just supposed to be a little plot bunny that's managed to grow into a plot rabbit. I won't rule out writing a sequel that picks up the story and continues on through year 7 but I currently have no plans to do so.
  
  It's funny you mentioned the "alternate story" where it's a normal wedding bond because that was my original idea: Fleur would have pulled Harry aside and informed him that her sister had bonded with Harry and that they were, for all intents and purposes, married. Harry would have been given new quarters to share with his wife and he would have had to consummate the bond with a very different Gabby (she would have been very apologetic to Harry for bonding him without his knowledge, thinking that he couldn't possibly want her because of her age) and Harry would have had to deal with having an eight-year-old wife and all the accompanying problems, but I chose to go the smut-filled route instead. I'm not saying that I won't ever write that version, but, like the sequel, I don't currently have any plans to do so.
  
  Once again, I'm glad you're liking the story and I hope you continue to do so. Thanks for the review.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Theta 2009-06-03

  When my friend told me about this my first reaction was shock. Then I looked to see If you had gotten off the loli train as (bluezone put it) or did something like taking hostages onn ff.net (the aging to a decent age bit) and i realized that in many ways my friend was right. This story has many things. decent characters and script, good sex scenes. Apart from the tiny fact that... Gabrielle is 8 and looks it. it just really wierds me out.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) deadpoolollie 2009-06-03

  i love it, i love it, i love it. absolutely brilliant fic, both hot and with a compelling plot. especially like the twist at the end there, although i thought ginny was a bit OOC.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you like the story so far.
  
  Ginny may be a bit OOC, but keep in mind that she harbored an attraction to Harry even before she was subjected to his new "pull" so she's feeling it more than most and might be pushed to be a bit less shy around him. As the title of the chapter implies, what happened between them was the unexpected result of her crush on him. As for her tastes in bed, I figured a combination of being the little sister of six older brothers would have mad her develop a shell so that she rarely lets anyone see the real her. Plus, Harry instinctively knows how to please her sexually so he brings out her submissive side that she likely wouldn't have let anyone see until after years of love and trust under normal circumstances.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Intelligo 2009-06-05

  Love the story so far, very hot. Keep it up!

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) corey123 2009-06-12

  please put fleur into it, she is so fucking hot.

  Author's response

  Fleur's fate was decided before I wrote chapter 2. What that fate is, however, you'll just have to wait and see.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) bgoldnyxnet 2009-06-15

  Sigh. Getting repetitious. A little plot would be helpful.

  Author's response

  Sorry. But as stated from the beginning, this is PWP. This story is the week following the second task. Nothing happened that week.
  
  My next chaptered story will have a plot if that's what you're looking for.
  
  NOI

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