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• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Theta 2009-06-15

  still with the loli? such a shame...

  Author's response

  Loli? I can only assume you're talking about Hermione being described as small breasted. I don't see that as loli. It's a fact of life that some women have small breasts.
  Would you rather I write that every female character is a DD-cup?
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Myroastbeefa 2009-08-08

  I thought this was excellent. I really don't want it to end because I'm enjoying it so much. I'm curious about the reason a bond was iniated with Hermione. I know he saved Gabby and Ginny and that Fleur forced a bond on him. But I haven't followed why there's a bond with Hermione.

  Author's response

  I'm glad you like it.
  
  As for bonds, they have nothing to do with saving anyone--not directly anyway. True, Harry saved Gabby which made her look upon him as her savior and that, in combination with her entering Veela puberty cause her to initiate the bond.
  
  Hermione and Ginny's bonds however have nothing to do with him saving them. It was more a subconscious decision on their part to spend the rest of their lives with him in combination with his subconscious acceptance of them as his.
  
  Hope this clears things up.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) crashbook13 2009-08-08

  I like it. Not sure about "Bitch" but 'shrug' an author knows best. And as to that other review you linked to... then he should not read it!

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Thummim 2009-08-10

  ...Nice
  The 8-year-old Loli-ness of the story made me blink-blink, but I think the internet has desentisized me to such things. As it is, I got over it; it adds a sort of charm to the story that other Harry/Gabby stories lack.
  I enjoyed it a lot more than I think I should, and I eagerly await the end.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) videogamesrule 2009-08-13

  This story is amazing, hoping the ending few chapters are as good as the story was so far. there is JUST the right amount of smut, not overdoing it, and just the right amount of girls involved. Very nice, hoping more in the future.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) neklind 2009-08-14

  Great fic so far i am really looking forward to the final 3 chapters!! :D
  I was reading your Bio and saw that you had outlined a story call The Black Collar Collection that look interesting i really hope you will write it and post it on here sometime. :) Keep up the good work and update again soon please!! :P

  Author's response

  I fully intend to write The Black Collar Collection. It won't be next as I need a break from the from the whole slavery/ownership-multiple partner/smut stories for a while. Not sure what I'm going to write next beyond (un)Certainty, which will come right after I finish TURO.
  
  Glad you like it BTW and I can't wait for the final three chapters as well (though not for the same reasons as you--I'm looking forward to having a novel length fic finished).
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) bisgof 2009-09-05

  I find it hilarious that the way the Title reads it shows up on the story list is 'The Unexpected Result of...' No One Interesting.
  
  I hope you write some more soon, of all the recent stories on this site this is the only decently written one.

  Author's response

  Yes, well, I can cause unexpected results (your results may vary).
  
  I'm writing again (had to pretty much stop while I was learning lines for my next play) and will be posting the last three chapters soon.
  
  And I don't think I can thank you enough for that complement.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) dragonblade3200 2009-10-12

  My god I love this story!
  I am far from having a lolita complex, but the way you write and the wonderful Taboo on the subject is soooo thrilling!
  That being said I like the idea of a veela harry (so long as he's straight goddarnnit) But I have to wonder, if he WERE to concentrate on a male would he be able to elicit a response? I mean is it just with those HE is attracted too or those who already have some sort of attraction TO HIM or is it the opposite sex only?

  Author's response

  It is either the opposite sex or those who are attracted to men, whichever way you want to look at it. In the scene with Draco and Pansy, I had intended to put in a bit about Harry being surprised that he could sense that tendril of magic that he's come to associate with the "pull" leading to Draco. It would have been the payoff for my earlier line about Draco being gay. In the end, I couldn't make it fit the way I wanted to, I was nearly done with a chapter that was already too long (in my opinion) and it just didn't seem to fit the scene the way I had written it, so I left it out.
  
  So, I guess it's really up to the reader. If you want to imagine that it's only females he can attract, or that he can attract males too, go right ahead. He will not however, be attracting any males in this story.
  
  I am certainly glad you like the story so far. It was, as a matter of fact, originally started to see if I could write sex scenes between a teen and a child in such a way that the average reader would accept it, and in that respect at least, I seem to have been successful.
  
  Other chapters are coming, I have just hit a bit of writer's block and am very not happy with the current state of chapter 14. It will happen, however.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Jaksf 2009-11-14

  Great story one of the best I've read, however it seems like your not updating anymore. No updates in three months and three days! Are you still writing?

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Lassi_Q 2010-08-19

  Give uss the ending!! Man loved it so mutch..

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