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• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) zicou 2009-05-16

  it looks like a great beginning!
  I hope you will make a real story after this first chapter!
  Continuuuuuue!
  Z.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Nynaeve 2009-05-16

  good start, you can expand this chap and write an entire story out from it.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) bluedevil26 2009-05-16

  wow cant complain about ch being to short waiting for next ch should be some fire works in the next one

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) RavenPuck 2009-05-16

  that was grat start t oa fic i hope u put mroe in it adn show how ron and herminoe and dum dum recate to this mybe have harry run off to france with gabby's family at the end of the year adn stuff

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Flamer 2009-05-16

  Keep going, this is a very good start. Next chapter should be a lot of fun (both the good and other kind).

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) whitwolf06 2009-05-16

  Great start! Can't wait for more!

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) aceofspades616 2009-05-16

  Very interesting. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this story. Keep up the good work. ^_^

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Delcera 2009-05-16

  'Twasn't bad, NOI. For a first work, I am impressed.
  
  Tell me: is this to be a oneshot, or a multi-chaptered work? I must admit, I'm rather curious as to the ramifications of this. Especially Fleur's reaction.

  Author's response

  There will be a few chapters. There's no real plot but I have some ideas to keep the story rolling for a few more of Harry's days and nights.
  Fleur's reaction will be. . . interesting. I hope you enjoy it.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) ARJAN 2009-05-16

  Excellent start! Especially considering it's your first work. I'm truly impressed!
  
  This is a story definitely worth expanding! Please continue with it.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Cateagle 2009-05-16

  Nothing to really flame about, 'twas a very good first work. I'd say that this has the potential to be the lead-off chapter to a very interesting sotry. oh, and my compliments for making the fireworks betwen Gabrielle and Harry quite plasuible.

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