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• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) twaptwap72 2009-05-16

  Great story, hope you continue it. several times in the story a "change" that is happaning to the couple is mentioned. what if that change is to harry's sexual mojo, or scent? making harry almost into a veela himself. where he forms soulbonds with other girls forming a harem. like ginny, luna, susan bones, hannah abbott, su li, daphne greengrass(maybe her sister astoria, who would be a first or second year. and with a soulbond harry will be an adult, some of the girls could be arranged marriages.sirius may have adopted harry so the arrangements could come from the potter, black, or some other family gringotts shows him inheriting. these things would throw a lot of turmoil into what would "normanally" happen fourth year.

  Author's response

  Oh, one of your guesses is a good one. I won't say which. You'll just have to wait and see.
  
  Glad you liked the story so far.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) automaticsnow 2009-05-16

  If you continue this you should through in fleur.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) dennisud 2009-05-16

  Are you going to add a girlfriend/wife to the duo (like Hermione or Luna) and either have them cooperate with Dumbles or flee?
  
  Eitherway you have one hack of a story!
  
  dennisud
  
  

  Author's response

  Glad you liked it.
  
  As for the possible girlfriend/wife, well, let's just say that with the next "Unexpected Result", she would have to be one very understanding girl.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) MadMax666 2009-05-16

  Not bad for a first work. A lot of authors have trouble writing a convincing sexual encounter, but you managed to...ahem...bring it off quite well.
  
  Hope to see this continued, and made into a full story.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) jjracer24 2009-05-16

  Good one shot, I'd definitely be interested in reading more along this story line.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) marshall88 2009-05-16

  MINT:) reallly good , hope to read more of it soon my friend :)

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) siledubhghlase 2009-05-16

  Okay, you were concerned about flames, considering Gabrielle's age. She's more than half-Veela. They mature must faster than humans. The only human trait it appears she has is that she's flat-chested.
  
  Veela mature quickly and live long lives from what I understand. At eight years old, Gabrielle is just coming into her prime. It's just that Harry's seeing the human part of her and thinking like a human. A human 8-year-old girl wouldn't have presented herself that way either.
  
  No flames here, but it does cry to continue. Good job.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) waterfox 2009-05-16

  please do continue this story. it has a interesting begining that proves to be quite promising

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Binx 2009-05-17

  Excellent start! I really hope you keep going with this story, there is so much that you can do with it. I am really impressed especially for this being your first work.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) LabRat 2009-05-17

  The only thing I can say, is that a bunch of sick pedophiles are going to be incredibly jealous that they can't get away with banging an eight year old girl.

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