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The Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) spedclass 2009-05-17
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!The Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) _Amy_Revenge_ 2009-06-11
"Harry was randy."
I've always wanted to see something written with those words in it!!
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(#) dareycow 2009-08-07
You know, in Australia they lock up sick pricks like you in prison. I understand it is fanfiction and all, but from what I've seen just from reading the first part of chapter 1 your fiction is just a written version a child-pornography. Disgusting prick. Take a bullet please.Author's response
It's a good thing I don't live in Australia as I tend to enjoy my freedom of speech and am able to recognize the difference between fiction and reality.
As much as I value your highly enlightened opinion about the content of my story (having read nearly 6% of it), I think I will continue to write.
Please feel free not to read it.
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(#) swimfly 2009-08-08
Wow Dareycow I just want to say that what you said was both idiotic as well as reprehensible. First of all no you would not be locked up in prison in Australia seeing as how this doesn't fall under child pornography. Get your facts straight. And second of all telling someone to take a bullet just because you don't like their writing says a lot about your personality, and in some countries that could get you jail time if it was construed as a death threat. So in the future why dont you just shut the fuck up and if you dont like a fic, hit that little x on the top right of your computer screen instead of writing a dumbass flame about things you dont understandThe Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) Dragen 2009-08-08
You a fucking fool dareycow, for one this is fiction and ANYTHING can go, be it child-pornography, rape or things like that, second there are there stories like this out there, my Pet story being one of them... stop being a fool. If you don't like this kind of story, don't read it, and we were WARNED that this story had sex with a teenager and a eight year old. You the only one to blame to read it, if you don't like this sort of thing. Now get a life mate, and stop being an idiot.The Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) Darkmark66 2009-08-29
Excellent well written chapter “array of femininity that, to Harry saturated the common room” brilliant line one of many in this chapter. The pace of the chapter was good and it was very intimate without being nasty or brutal. I look forward to the continuation of this story.The Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) jaffajake 2012-11-26
I don't know what to think about this. On one hand part of me is screaming its wrong. On the other hand the story is well written, and kinda enjoy itThe Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) Michaelthegodofsex 2013-02-26
this story is dangerous to me...one i might mess up my keyboard and 2 it would be embarrassing for me, but this story is awesome even though i hadn't even finished the first chapter yet... eh ill do it later(that's what she said) :DThe Unexpected Result Of. . .
(#) MastaK 2020-04-20
Are you that bad a writer or are you joking? I can barely understand a god damn sentence, please use proper English
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