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• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) emperador 2009-05-16

  I was thinking about writing something along this line myself, but I'm glad I didn't and you did. Very nice, excellent writing.
  
  I do hope you'll give try to avoid the clichés a bit, there are several Harry/Gabrielle stories out there that follow a bit of the same plot and this has the potential to become a story that possesses quality. Though if you don't think you're up to it, I'd agree with keeping it a one-shot. Or maybe several one-shots.

  Author's response

  Well, the story was never intended to be other than a one-shot until I started writing. As such there's really no plot and I have no real interest in developing one. The following chapters will be about how Harry deals with the aftermath of the bonding and all the little unexpected things that happen as a result (hence the title). I have three more chapters planned at the moment, but, unless inspiration strikes in the intervening days, that will be it.
  
  Glad you liked it, BTW.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) jabarber69 2009-05-16

  WoW, Please continue this! its quite easy to forget that she might be chronicle 8 yrs old but like she said she's veela! she not hooman and she knows more about sex and getting a guy turned on than most teenage or older girls I have known! so again please continue this...I would like to see the reaction of his friends, her sister and parents and the wiz world to this bonding...and face it sounds like she has also matured during the bonding so she probably will look like his age from now on... and as any teenage or older boy will tell ya having a willing female slave for sex and anything else is one hell of a fantasy!

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) DtH4ever 2009-05-16

  over @ WC4 there's an positve authors answer to one review requesting the continuation.
  
  for my review, it's the same as over there. (gotta love copy and paste)
  
  
  
  flame? why?!?
  
  
  
  i'm sure you dont agree to pedophilia in real life, so one cant flame there;
  
  the grammar and spelling are good, so no flames here;
  
  and even if the whole plot idea gabby/harry bonding because of the lake, or the wake of the events there isnt exactly new anymore, you did it different then the others.
  
  
  
  more chapters would be nice, but as far as i can see there are two main directions for your story to go...
  
  a) PWP (all accept the bond, and harry likes being the one in control for the first time of his life)
  
  or
  
  b) detailed following of the reactions from the others in hogwarts and beyond
  
  
  
  as the cab driver in Vampire:Masquerade says :"Where to?"

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) DtH4ever 2009-05-16

  what i forgot to post was a link to the WC4 archive, for those who dont know it.
  
  http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/index.php here are the fics
  
  http://wc4.fanficlinks.com/fanfiction/tiki-index.php here's the rest like forums

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) lgsimian 2009-05-16

  dont stop now, you have a great beginning

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) jkyuubi 2009-05-16

  Good stuff. It definitely is set up to be more than just a one shot.

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) proyjr 2009-05-16

  keep going great story

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) fic_reader1 2009-05-16

  dam good start keep it up dont let a story with potintal die. so would their be other wemon or just gaby

  Author's response

  Other girls will come and go.
  One may stay. . .
  
  Glad you liked it.
  
  NOI

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) Ravenian 2009-05-16

  Very well written!
  
  I can't help but hope that you will make this a longer story with more girls for Harry... ;)

• The Unexpected Result Of. . .

  (#) BrotherBludgeon 2009-05-16

  I'm afraid, oh Person of No Interest, that you've vastly overestimated your constituency.
  
  Here, among the NC-17 Ficwad crowd, they don't see this as one minor violating an eight-year-old.
  
  They see two consenting partners, one aged beyond his years, and one belonging to a species that apparently sexually matures before they're toilet trained.
  
  What peaks my curiousity is what fallout this is likely to have. Not from the Hogwarts crew, I think I can guess that. What happens when Harry realizes that the only word he has to go on in terms of what's "acceptable" in Veela society is that of the little girl who all but admitted that this bond had her thinking exclusively with her glands.
  
  "Really, Monsieur and Madame Delacoeur, she told me that sex with children is common in your people's culture. I'm serious."

  Author's response

  "Person of No Interest". I like that.
  
  My impetus for the warning was simply that, while there are a lot of stories involving/including underage sex to be found on Ficwad, there are few that include partners quite so young. Truthfully, once I started writing the story, it became an exorcise in convincing the reader that the sex was, in this case, actually acceptable.
  
  As for fallout, it's likely nothing that you're expecting as I've never seen another story that handles it quite the same way.
  
  I hoped you liked the story so far and hope also that you continue to do so.
  
  NOI

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